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Basic Business Writing Skills
Transcript of Basic Business Writing Skills
Avoid the ZOMBIES!
Structures are Important!
- Executive Summary
- Background and Objectives (Intro)
- Methodologies and Target Audience
INTERNAL UNDP INDONESIA WRITING SKILLS TRAINING
Basic Business Writing Skills
Know the INVERTED PYRAMID of WRITING!!
Indonesia, a member of the G20, has
achieved progress in some
Millennium Development Goal (MDG) targets which include
the poverty rate reduction to 11.37 percent
(4 percent decrease in the course of five years).
In 2012, the GDP per capita has increased to USD 3,556
(6 percent increase from 2009 to 2012)
for over 246.9 million of Indonesians. Nevertheless, the disparity remains
a serious challenge
throughout 33 provinces that stretches out in over 13,000 islands. In the eastern part of Indonesia, the poverty rate double the national level and geographical remote locations have caused
lack of critical public services
provision such as health and education.
Let's invest in Basic Public Services
Let's invest in Health and Education
should the situation arise where...
in respect of...
in the event of...
when writing project documents!
MAKE THE ABSTRACT CONCRETE
Just say it!
The authors of this paper suggest that Strategic QE will not damage inflationary expectations for two reasons…
Strategic QE will not damage inflationary expectations for two reasons…
The results possibly seem to indicate that…
The results indicate that…
Be positive - even when you're being negative.
Cut unnecessary propositions - don't be too wordy!
The potato's opinion
Break up long sentences
First, to make progress in both developing a new theory to underpin systemic change and weakening the existing theory and its hold on academia we aim to establish a bulkhead for systemic change in economic academia through creating a new economic model which does not follow the dominant conventions of assuming equilibrium, excluding the financial sector and not recognising that environmental changes we face have thresholds that are non-linear, irreversible and have fundamental impacts on the rest of the economy.
has low capacity
scope for strengthening
local government capacity....
A plan of action is being determined by the board of trustees.
The board of trustees are determining a plan of action
The fig tree has been pulled down...
Somebody’s PULLED DOWN the fig tree!
The potatoes have been analysed by Barry…
Barry has analysed the potatoes
Be active not passive
To make something less accusing – “this bill has not been paid”.
When you don't know who or what the doer is, and it doesn’t matter – “the England team has been picked”.
If it genuinely sounds better.
When is the passive tense OK?
Use strong, concrete verbs
50% of Indonesians believe
the unemployed choose to stay out of work.
50% of Indonesians believe the unemployed choose to stay out of work
The politician responded to the allegations
The politician responded vehemently to the allegations
The project faces
a lot of problems
The project is
working towards addressing challenges
It is recognized that in the mid to long term, civil society organizations (CSOs) will continue to provide an integral service to rural and isolated communities with limited or no access to basic government services in Tanah Papua.
50 tonnes of bluefin tuna fish
Vauxhall city farm
The Arctic 30
velvet eye patch
Table of contents
Each paragraph in its rightful place
Start with your point upfront
People Centred Development Programme (PCDP) has successfully collaborated with Bank Indonesia Papua and West Papua regional offices to carry out a series of training for piloting and strengthening five Enterprise Development Centers (Business Development Service providers) in Jayawijaya, Boven Digoel and Sarmi districts, Papua Province and Manokwari and Fak Fak districts, West Papua Province.
"Five business development service providers have been trained through People Centred Development Programme (PCDP) to finance and provide technical capacity development for local businesses."
Bullet points & lists
State your point!
People Centred Development Programme has been contracting 79 Civil Society Organizations (CSOs) as service providers for the governments in
specifically to provide education and health services to across 12 districts in remote locations. There are 40,000 people who are now able to access these services.