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Hello there.

My name is Daniel, and I am recording this video

regarding to my assessment, too.

And in this assessment, I'll be discussing number one the

feedback I received for my assessment one or assignment one.

And also have I'll be a tackling Assessment Street on

how I'll be using the feedback to improve my, um,

my great in that.

So the feedback I have received for assessment one where

number one in terms Off I should write from third

person point of view, I should utilize wth e g

L C rules appropriately should especially give attention to pinpoint

referencing no so quotation marks and reference in different, different

cases and sources.

I should also do grammatical corrections by re reading and

re editing as I go and ensuring there's a logical

flow to my argument on also to make sure that

my conclusion should some of the major findings have got

in the argument rather than introducing new ideas to it,

Um, my feedback in terms of the strength areas of

strength I have receivers.

One is that I have have engaged the material very

well and that has, um, created a bit of, you

know, positive feedback from the markka and the marker have

enjoyed reading my argument, Um, and so the strength of

my argument.

And I quote, she said, Or he said, Uh, she

said, Sorry that she is really looking forward to reading

my final assessment, so that is very encouraging.

So in terms off, do I?

How do I see the Marcus, you know, view and

this? I think it was fair.

It was good feedback.

Um, well, detailed feedback very encouraging.

And also have put reasonable, um, points out for me

to follow to improve my cause off learning.

So in this, I'll be for assessment.

Three. I'll be implementing those feedbacks and making sure that

I do work on my a d l c application.

Appropriately. And also, I will be proof reading, um, well

before submission.

And also check my grammatical errors There is, and also

ensuring that there is a logical flow to the argument

making. Uh, once I've said that, now I would like

to focus on my, um, assess ministry.

The question will be tackling or I'm planning to tackle

in assess ministry.

It would be the judgment made by Chief Justice regarding

to the case off love and commonwealth.

So in this case, um, I will be looking at,

um, the argument that Chief Justice has made their chief

justice in general as you can.

She's a visual aid that has been made heat that

number one, the citizenship is defined, and non citizenship is

defined by the power given to the parliament from the

Constitution section 51 19 on there.

Besides that, she argues that the definition of what it

means to be a citizen and the description the characteristics

of what a citizen is has bean point in by

the power that was given Thio the parliament to enact

the Citizenship Act and describe those things.

Even though she does concede that alien is not well

defined, What does it mean to be alien on Dhe?

Beyond that, she also talks about sense of belonging is

not a feeling or is not even the lines off

time someone spends in Australia.

But it is a legal relationship.

This a legal relationship, and that legal relationship is approved

upon the condition that the parliament puts or has enacted

in the law.

Um, she acknowledges that there is a special connection between

the Aboriginal Australians and the land.

But she limits that land being that entitled land ownership

through the native entitlement rather than the whole of Australia.

And in that case, theme arbol case that native entitlement

is established by the common law.

However, that does not imply citizenship or sense of belonging

in such a way that a person is outside the

distinction between citizenship and non citizenship, Yeah.

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