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Copy of STAAR Literary Essay

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STAAR Literary Essay Writing Creativity Setting Characters Resolution Plot Conflict Details Action Literary Writing
Establishes a setting
Includes a conflict
Uses dialogue
Includes a resolution
Entertains its audience Who are YOUR favorite characters? The ABC’s of Literary Writing The ABC’s of literary writing can be effectively accomplished through character development. In the following examples, note how actions and dialogue create authentic and believable characters, introduce a conflict, and advance the plot of a story. 1. Actions reveal character better than simply telling the reader. Give your reader a mental picture of the scene you’re visualizing. Mother interrupted Amy’s playtime by announcing it was time for a nap. It was obvious that she wasn’t going to go easily.

Her sleepy brown eyes hardened into red-rimmed slits. She cocked her plastic Viking helmet aggressively, the horns sticking out only a little more than her curls. One fist clutched a decapitated lollipop, the other a cardboard sword. She leveled the point at my chest. “You mean dragon!” she growled. “You’ll never make me nap!” I’ll never forget how I felt after Fido died. I was miserable. This morning, I filled his water bowl all the way to the top- just the way he likes it- before I remembered. 2. Add dialogue and let your characters speak. Dialogue combined with action makes believable characters. Use dialogue sparingly
but effectively in your literary story for STAAR. “Where are you going?”
“Out,” Matt said.
“Not again, so late. You need to get to bed for school tomorrow.”
“Don’t wait up for me. I’m gonna be late,” he said as he shut the door and left.” “Where are you going?” his mother asked looking up from her reading. Matt cracked his knuckles nervously before answering, “Out.”
“Not again, so late. You need to get to bed for school tomorrow.” She pulled off her glasses, drew in a long, weary breath, and sighed deeply.
“Don’t wait up for me. I’m gonna be late,” he called out over his shoulder as the door shut behind him. His mom sat alone to worry in silence. 3. Physical Description You could tell by his demeanor that Billy Bellaire was one of the most confident guys in school. Other guys walking through the hallway were taller and even more handsome, but there was something about Billy Bellaire. His arms swung loose at his side and his dark hair was long and pulled back behind his head, held by a rubber band. The dark jacket he wore was straight out of the local thrift shop, she could tell, but the way he wore it suggested a sense of pride, or at least a lack of caring what others thought about him. 4. Idiosyncrasies (Quirks or Habits) Philip always cracked his knuckles when he was nervous or anxious. Junior tapped his fingertips against the table and looked at his watch constantly. His leg bounced up and down and he gulped the hot coffee as if it would hurry up his friend’s arrival. 5. Objects or Possessions Michael felt guilty, fearing that his mother would be disappointed in him as he looked at the locket she gave him. Michael touched the locket around his neck and rolled it between his fingers. His mother had given him that locket, with her picture inside, when he had left to live with his father. What would she think of him now? Miles knew what it meant to be alone. When he was a child growing up, his father had been in the military. They had traveled from Florida, to Georgia, to California, to Kentucky. He had rarely had a friend for very long. By the leap from California, he had already decided having friends was a risk; the fewer the friends, the easier it was to leave. This philosophy had made him a real outsider at Glenview High School. In the six months he had been there he had not really made a single friend, but as he stood there staring at Sheila, he realized that he just might have to change. It was time for coach to retire and make room for new blood in the program. Coach Barnes was overweight, overpaid, and over-the-hill. Other Good Examples Quotes and Punctuation 1. Direct and Indirect Quotations: Use quotation marks to begin and end a direct quotation.
Ex. “I don’t want to see that movie a third time,” said Julia.

2. Do NOT use quotation marks to set off an indirect quotation.
Ex. Maria said that she didn’t want to see the movie a third time.




3. Punctuation of Direct Quotations: Enclose the exact words used by a speaker or writer in quotation marks. The first word of the quotation is capitalized.
Ex. “We’ll be home at about six o’clock,” said Heather.
Heather said, “We’ll be home at about six.”

4. Put question marks and exclamation points inside the quotation marks if they are part of the quotation.
Ex. “Where did you find that foil wallpaper?” Fabiella asked.
“I had to walk all the way back to school!” Liz complained.



5. Enclose both parts of a divided quotation in quotation marks. Do NOT capitalize the first word of the second part unless it begins a new sentence.
Ex. “Boston’s Old State House, built in the eighteenth century,” the guide continued, “now has a subway stop underneath it.”

6. In dialogue, a new paragraph indicates a change in speaker.
Ex. “Why does your mother bother making bread herself?” asked Martha, starting on a second, warm slice. “It takes her forever.”
“Letting it rise does take time,” Allison replied, “but the bread does that work on its own.” " "

A teacher with a grudge
A politician
A rebellious student
A musical theater performer
A woman with ten cats A reluctant volunteer
A self-destructive brother (sister) An inventor
A middle-aged loner A computer hacker
An amnesiac A twin
An anorexic dancer A bike messenger
An accident victim A Holocaust survivor
A personal trainer A shy beekeeper
A bus passenger
A first year teacher
An Eagle Scout
A rabid football fan Pick a Character! A child prodigy
A bully A ditzy waitress
A cheating student A traveler
A suspicious hotel manager A war hero
A deaf hairdresser A widow
A paranoid redneck A barista with sinus trouble
A gambler A homeless child
A hiker A butcher
A priest A phony war hero
An earthquake survivor An Oscar nominee
A betrayed girlfriend A sculptor with a limp
A missing person An illiterate miner
A millionaire Now that you’ve chosen your character, you will decide what characterization to assign him or her using the examples below.

Active Ingredient: PERSONALITY!

Adjectives (describing words) are useful in creating a character, but we established a few pages ago that actions speak louder than words.
Try to give the reader the description of your character without using that word in the text.




Examples:
My character is short:
Our school was previously a junior high, but Mary still had to stand on her tip toes to reach her locker.

My character is shy:
She often peeked out from behind the textbook whenever Mrs. Smith called on her for an answer.




My character is big:
The chair groaned a little under the weight of John when he took his seat.

My character is loyal:
The only thing more dependable in my life was my Labrador retriever.

My character is cheap:
Whenever the bill came, he suddenly needed to use the bathroom, check his cell phone, or get something out of his car.
An effective way to create conflict is to begin with an internal conflict that the main character has: character vs. him/herself.
One effective plot is to create a situation where the main character is struggling with something internally and then introduce an external conflict that will slam him or her.





Types of External Conflict:
Man vs. man
Man vs. society
Man vs. nature




Develop a simple plot line that allows the character to decide how he or she will react to the obstacles and that shows how outside forces may impact the characters, make them change, grow, or develop.

The short fiction piece does not have to tie up all the loose ends in 26 lines, but needs to show some change in the main character in at least one significant way. Creating Conflict ! Create a setting.
1. What is the time period?
2. Where does the story take place?
3. Brainstorm word choices for nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs that describe your setting.
**Your word choices should be descriptive to create imagery in your story. (You may need to use a thesaurus!) Setting
Time: 2012 during the summer time
Place: Near a beach Exercise 1: For each of the following sentences, insert commas, quotation marks, and capital letters where they are needed. If a sentence is correct, write C for correct.

1. When I shrieked in fear, the usher warned me to be quiet.

2. At the same time, Bob whispered, "It’s only a movie---calm down!"



3. He pointed out that the people around us were getting annoyed. correct
4. I quietly replied, "I’m sorry."



5. "You shouldn’t have screamed," he complained.
6. "From now on," I said to him, "I promise I’ll try to be quiet."



7. When the lights came on, Bob said, "It’s time to go."
8. Outside the theater, he muttered something about people who shouldn’t go to horror movies.


9. "But I can’t help it," I explained.
10. "You were even afraid," Bob protested, "during the credits!" Exercise 2: Rewrite the following sections of dialogue by adding the appropriate punctuation.
1. do as I say he said
"Do as I say," he said.





2. what are you doing I cried, seeing this as confirmation of his madness.
"What are you doing?" I cried, seeing this as a confirmation of his madness.





3. i need to fetch us some food he said, pulling the knot tight you’ll only interfere and I don’t want you running off
"I need to fetch us some food," he said, pulling the knot tight. "You'll only interfere, and I don't want you running off." NOUNS
beach
lunch
tacos
sunburn
internet ADJECTIVES
salty
tasty
spicy
sweltering
irritating ADVERBS
coincidentally
coolly
sluggishly
never
repeatedly VERBS
devoured
surfed
perspired
sauntered
hid Setting Word List
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