Bar Kamsa and Kamsa

Finally, when Jerry got home, it hit him. He was going to put salt in Pinky's cheese and all his food!! MOWAHAHA!! ( Jerry's evil laugh)

But then he remembered that Pinky was Jewish and if he told the Mousy King that Jewish mice don't accept any presents from other religions, he would make Pinky and that silly Brain leave Mouse Village for ever! It was a genius plan!

this is what he wanted to happen.........

but it went a bit wrong

So Jerry left the party. As he was leaving, he started to think that he would get his revenge on Pinky

"NO!!! Leave now you can't stay !! SECURITY!!" he shouted at Jerry

" I will pay for all the meals! Please let me stay!" begged Jerry

Jerry really didn't want to go and he also didn't want to be embarrass so he said softly " Please can I stay I will pay for my meal"

Pinky walked up to Jerry and said, " What are you doing here you useless rat!! Leave my party at once!! NOW!!!

NO!! NO!! NO!! SECURITY!!! TAKE HIM AWAY!!!!!

All of a sudden, Pinky saw Jerry. He was so mad to see him there instead of his BMFF ( Best Mouse Friend Forever)

At the Party

When Jerry walked in, he was so amazed by all the lights and party stuff !

Jerry started to feel really excited and couldn't wait for the party.

The king was shocked to hear that Pinky didn't accept the walking cheese. The King told all his subjects that they were to barge into Pinky's house and 'sort him out'.

Jerry

Jerry delivered the walking cheese to Pinky and said that he was sorry that he came to the party and that he should have stayed at home. After Jerry finished his speech, he walked out of the room and hid behind the wall. When he was there, he took out his tape recorder and got ready to record.

So Pinky examined the cheese making sure it was Kosher. When he saw the lips of the walking cheese, he was stunned. He screamed at the top of his lungs and said," This cheese is not nice. I will not eat it!" While he said this, Jerry got it all on tape and ran back to the King to show him that Pinky was to be banished from the village at once.

Brain ( Pinky's best bud)

So Jerry took the walking cheese. But, without the King's knowledge, he cut the lips of the walking cheese.

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So Jerry told the King and he said " Ok, well, I am going to see if the Jewish Mice are indeed ungrateful. I am going to send Pinky a walking cheese."

I don't blame the Mail man. I mean they look so alike!! Well back to the story.

But the mail man was not paying attention and gave the invitation to Jerry ( Pinky's enemy)

So Pinky asked the mail man to deliver the invitation to Brain

Pinky was going to throw a party and he wanted his best friend, Brain, to come.

there was a boy, well a young mouse. His name was Pinky.

" It's alright Jerry. I guess I was a bit hard on you after all. I hope you can forgive me?" said Pinky in quite a sad voice.

"I forgive you. I think that I over reacted about the whole thing. I am also very sorry, my King. I tricked you. Can you forgive me, please?" said Jerry.

" I forgive both of you. FORGIVE AND FORGET, THAT IS WHAT I ALWAYS SAY " said the King

So now Jerry and Pinky are also good friends. They always see each other and help each other out. This is the end of the story of Jerry and Pinky ( Bar Kamsa and Kamsa my version)

By Zoë Amato

The story of Bar Kamsa and Kamsa - my version

As the King was walking to Pinky's house, Jerry started to feel bad. When they knocked on the door, Jerry shouted "DON'T DO IT!! IT IS ALL MY FALUT!! I CUT THE LIP OF THE WALKING CHEESE !! ALL I WANTED WAS REVENGE!!!!!! I AM SORRY MOUSEY KING. I AM SORRY PINKY. I AM THE ONE WHO MUST BE SENT TO LIVE IN JAIL OR SOMEWERE ELSE!! I WISH I COULD TAKE IT ALL BACK :-("

Once upon a time.....

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