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Hoang Nhan Huynh

on 9 September 2016

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Overall, excellent work!

I'm very impressed with your writing styles

Rooms for improvements
The Good
Really good Grammar and Vocabulary
Careful and detailed planning
Relevant and useful information
The Bad
Some essays are just too long
There are still spelling errors
Cut down background information
Include more opinions and analysis of your opinions
The Lesson
Keep the same writing style
Learn from each other - make copies of your writing
Revisit your essays - rewrite/replan if needed

Homework Corrections
Your Topic Sentence
....is linked with the beginning of your Support Sentence
...is linked with the next...
..remind the Reader about your argument.
...repeats itselt..
The Flow of An Essay
The final part of the Topic Sentence
...and this cycle...
The final part of your Support Sentence
..to constantly..
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