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Transcript of Writing Dialogue
About.com- Top 8 Tips for Writing Dialogue
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/crafttechnique/tp/dialogue.htm Free Write Using the picture as your inspiration, free write. Who are these two characters? What are they talking about?
What is she reading? What are the bottles?
(5 minutes) Bad Dialogue! "Good morning Janet, how are you?"
"Oh I'm fine thanks, how are you?"
"Not too bad thanks. Lovely weather today is it not?"
"Yes, gorgeous. Thank goodness that rain has stopped.
"Yes, I thought it would go on forever. That's a nice dress you're wearing." Why is this bad dialogue? What does good dialogue look like? The warm wind blew the bead curtain against the table.
‘The beer’s nice and cool,’ the man said.
‘It’s lovely,’ the girl said.
‘It’s really an awfully simple operation, Jig,’ the man said. ‘It’s not really an operation at all.’
The girl looked at the ground the table legs rested on.
‘I know you wouldn’t mind it, Jig. It’s really not anything. It’s just to let the air in.’
The girl did not say anything.
‘I’ll go with you and I’ll stay with you all the time. They just let the air in and then it’s all perfectly natural.’
‘Then what will we do afterwards?’
‘We’ll be fine afterwards. Just like we were before.’ -Ernest Hemingway, "Hill Like White Elephants" Let's practice Silently read your dialogue set up.
Create a short dialog between the two characters in the setup. (7 minutes)