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The Incredibles

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Nisrene Kourouche

on 19 September 2015

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Transcript of The Incredibles

Characters
Planning Stage
Editing
Evidence
Drafting
QUESTION:
How does the composer of your text construct an engaging character?
To Do List:
Villains:
Other Characters:
Syndrome
Mirage, Edna, etc...
The Incredibles - Bob, Helen, Violet, Dash and Jack-Jack, Frozone
Focus on:
Descriptive Language
Dialogue
Actions
Costuming
Characterisation

Steps to Take:
Choose a character from 'The Incredibles' (this can be a major or minor character)
What does the term 'Engaging' mean?
Why did you choose this character?
Why does this character stand out to you?
What makes this an interesting/appealing character?
Describe what this character is like.
Plan your Essay:
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Write a Draft:
Each paragraph should focus on a new idea
Use sophisticated language
Support your ideas with examples/evidence
EVIDENCE:
Address the question in your introduction. Introduce your text. Identify your character.
Provide at least three examples to support your choice of character.
THE INCREDIBLES
YEAR 7 ASSESSMENT TASK
Deconstruction of Task
The Characters
What makes Mr Incredible an appealing character?
Bob (Mr Incredible)
What makes Dash an engaging character?
Dash
What makes Helen an appealing character?
Helen (Mrs Incredible)
DRAFTING PROCESS
Include Examples
Ensure that you include a lot of description and specific examples. Always elaborate on your ideas.
DETAIL!
THINGS TO CHECK!

Spelling
Structure
Grammar
Punctuation
Language
Expression
Superheroes:
personality
beliefs
actions
costuming
What evidence is there to support your ideas?
work scene
robbery scene
costume scene
sense of humour
personality
actions
What evidence is there to support your ideas?
the scene in the Principal's office
In the cave with Violet
the final scene when he enters the school carnival
dinner scene

personality
sense of humour
actions
What evidence is there to support your ideas?
phone conversation
flight scene
dinner scene
EDITING PROCESS:
Once you have all your ideas and have written your essay, you must edit your own work!
Your draft should be hand written.
You must bring your draft in for
peer editing next Monday!
Edit your work:
Read over your draft and make any corrections
Get someone at home to read over your essay
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