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Fractured Fairy Tale

My Fractured Fairy Tale
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Toby Smith

on 1 December 2010

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Transcript of Fractured Fairy Tale

Tobin Smits
Fractured Fairy Tale There he is again, aged 10, Pete riding his bike around his block in the city when suddenly he runs into an old lady. The lady throws a spasm and then poof she turns taller, more warts apear on her trecerouse face and gets a hunched back as round as a pumpkin. Pete then realises she’s a witch because her walking stick turn into a broom with an evil smile on it and sprints away but not fast enough. A lightning bolt hits him in the back and he falls unconscious on his door step. “AHH!”, Pete wakes up he rubs his eyes and he sees big green hands and feels a prickle in his back, he sits up and takes it out he realises that blood is falling out. He takes a closer look and realise they are bugs. He’s shocked; he stands up realising he’s standing on water?! He panics looks up and realises he’s under a bridge. And three goats are coming his way he realises he is the troll in the three billy goats gruff but he doesn’t want to hurt these inocent animals so he doesn’t no what’s going to happen to them, but then, he focuses his eyes on the trail they’ll be walking in and finds a dead goat at the other side of the bridge, he thinks it was sprung by a trap so he studies the surrounding area. But hen he remembers he’s in this stateand says “how did I get myself into this mess”. Then he hears a little voice, “Don’t you remember me?” in a silly voice, he picks up it sound greedy and it rings a bell, bang, it hits him he’s been turned into a green troll by a witch! He demands a deal “You better turn me back or help me and at least and turn time back and don’t hurt anyone, including the bugs”,
“Ok”, she says but in a cheeky little way.
Then he hears a little voice, “Don’t you remember me?” in a silly voice, he picks up it sound greedy and it rings a bell, bang, it hits him he’s been turned into a green troll by a witch! He demands a deal “You better turn me back or help me and at least and turn time back and don’t hurt anyone, including the bugs”,
“Ok”, she says but in a cheeky little way. ‘Stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp’ I hear, I then rub my eyes to get used to the bright light, it’s like I’m staring straight into the sun, wait I am, and I’m on this soft cushion. Now I’m trying to stand up but my feet can’t get a grip on this white fluffy stuff but it’s incredibly comfortable. He can see people in the distant in caveman clothes that look out of proportion. When he’s walking up to them and they are getting bigger and bigger.He scurries when he realises they are giants. What is that thing it’s alive! It’s made of chocolate and lollies and dancing! I want it, I want it!!! “what is your name” I say, it replies with ‘Pinocchio’ and then its shrank roughly an inch “oh no” it says “this stupid spell makes my nose grow whenever I lie” ’whoop’ he shrank again “I don’t like being small so I’ll tell you the truth, whenever I lie I shrink 1.1253 inches” ‘whoop’ he grew 0.121394 inches that must be from telling the truth. “ I don’t like this spell that turned me into a treat it was just because I said something mean to a witch she made me so sweat LITERALY!”
“Awe you poor guy
“Actually I am a girl”
“Sorry”
“Well”
“I’ve ended up in all sorts of places I’m trying to find my way home in fact it was a witch that sent me here too” I mumbled “bye, I’m going to have a look around”. “What? A tree, what is that doing on top of the clouds? Actually it only looks like the top of a tree but there is a shine like metal, I’m going to have a look. There is a ladder on it going up but how far and to where, well there is only one way to find out” I think aloud.
“Definitely only one” I hear. It’s Miss Sweaty the chocolate doll.
“Well, bye bye unless you want to come with me?”.
“I sure do, I’ve been looking for a way out for at least 250 years now“ She says, well yells because I’m already high up the ladder.
“Your 240 years older than me and I’m 260 metres ahead of you”
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