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Well, I just moved to a new school and trying to fit in. I also have a annoying little sibling that is always bothering me and a older one too . I have a few main best friends that always help me when I'm in panic mode.We always stick with each other and never get into many fights.Just like best friends should.
Another time was when Nikki's painting for the art competition was accidentally destroyed. Nikki's friends secretly took pictures of other art pieces she made .Here is a quote from the story.''Well, after we heard about the accident with your painting, we rounded up with the kids with your best tattoo artwork, and Brandon took pictures of them during lunch.Then he printed out the photographs on the computer in the newspaper office.Mrs. Peach let the three of us work on your entry the entire afternoon in the library.We call it The Student Body.''(page 273 Zoey is talking)Later at the end of the book Nikki learned to accept her friends with their craze of books .She decides it wouldn't be so bad to go to National Library Week in NYC.Here is the last quote that shows friendship in the book.''But the strangest thing was that I was actually starting to look forward to attending National Library Week at the NYC public library .And we had a good chance of being selected.I mean ,just think about it! Chloe ,Zoey and me in Manhattan for five days without our 'rents! How EXCITING would THAT be ?! In the whole story friendship is shown to be an important thing .
I think the theme of the story is when ever you are feeling sad ,your friends can always brighten up your mood.In the story Nikki was tripped by someone and Chloe and Zoey were the only people in the whole school who made Nikki feel better after her fall.Chloe and Zoey helped Nikki clean some of the food that was on her and made Nikki feel less sad.Here are some quotes from the story." WHAT'S UP, GIRLFRIEND!! For some reason, seeing them made me start crying all over again.Soon, three of us were just chilling out in the janitor's closet talking about the drama with Jessica and Mackenzie.'' (pg 116 Nikki is talking) " Pretty soon the lunch period was almost over.Chloe and Zoey helped me scrub most of the food stains off my clothes with paper towels and hand soap from the sink .''(pg 118 Nikki is talking)
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An important value in the story is friendship .Throughout this book friendship is hinted.When Zoey and Chloe were having a fundraiser for books, Nikki had to draw a tattoo on people to get books.Nikki kept on doing a lot of work and didn't say anything after a while.Just to keep her friendship between her friends fine.But, later then quit.Than her friends apologized to her and they became friends again.
I liked the whole story but, I especially liked this passage from the story because I though it was funny and entertaining..I could even imagine how that would look like .I liked this passage from the story for many more reasons. I thought it was really funny, and you don't really see this style of writing in stories.The passage actually sounded like something I would say .(in the beginning of the passage) You could say I connected with the passage and with the whole story.
A passage that has vivid setting is when Nikki describes how someone from her class looks like.When I read the paragraph the character that was described reminded me of a Barbie doll.The character contrubutes to the scene because Mackenzie gave Nikki an invitation to give to Jessica to her party. Jessica was the Barbie doll I was talking about earlier.But ,Nikki thought that the invitation was actually for her.So Nikki gets all excited for the invitation that wasn't for her and Jessica notices that Nikki took her invitation and is steaming mad.Nikki turns around to see that Jessica was part of Mackenzie's group .The Barbie doll group. Nikki sees that the invitation couldnt have been for her but for another person in the CCP .
She had long blond hair and was wearing a pink, glittery lip gloss, a pink sweater ,a pink miniskirt, and a headband trimmed with fake pink diamonds. If a had spotted her in Toys "R'' Us, I swear i would have probably mistaken her for a new fashion doll.(pg 75)