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Hi, everybody.
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So today's Friday I thought we could have a bit
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of fun and do a really, really cool piece of
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writing about Weaken up inside.
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Ah, volcano.
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So let's have a look at my example.
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I've tried to add in a little bit of humor
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as well.
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A some of those key words that I've asked you
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above to include in your piece of writing.
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So let's have a look at my piece of writing.
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Hope you enjoy.
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Warm, warm, Very warm, Hot, scorching, hot.
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Waking up from my dream, I shouted, Ah, my goodness.
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It is absolutely boiling in here.
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It suddenly dawned on me I wasn't in my comfy
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bed. In fact, I wasn't even in my bedroom underneath.
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May was the most uncomfortable rock that I've been sleeping
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on. Surrounded me Was more rocks on DME or rocks
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on dhe?
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Yes, you guessed it More rocks.
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It's a hard rock life.
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I signed myself.
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No, this is no time for humor are terrible jokes.
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Where on earth am I?
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Welcome Through the magma chamber announced a familiar voice.
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Mr. Quinn, is that you?
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What is going on?
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Where are I began before being rather rudely interrupted.
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Welcome to the magma chamber.
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Mr. Quinn exclaimed again.
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I then realized Mr Quinn was not his normal self.
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Creeping out of the shadows was a silhouette off a
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tall person.
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Was this a ghost, or was I imagining the entire
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thing? Suddenly, on Ash Cloud coated the entire room in
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thick smoke.
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Uh huh.
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Well, everybody, what did you think of that?
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I had a lot of fun putting that together on.
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I had to put on a different accent as Mr
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Quinn, because I was reading at my normal voice.
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So I'm not American, as you know, but I just
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started Put on a bit of silly voice for that
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one. Alright, so although the top of it, you can't
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say because off the and Prezi logo, it does say
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warm. Warm.
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All right, so by politics, small on the top line
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here, it does say it.
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Warm, warm.
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All right, so there is my example.
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You can have a read of that again if you
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would like, or you can repay the video and listen
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to me.
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Read notes up to yourself.
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So everybody had no like you to do a piece
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of writing about waking up inside a volcano.
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Alright, hopefully about something that none of us will ever
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have to do in life.
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But we have a bit of fun with it.
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All right, What would be some of the things that
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you would see or you would hear inside a mysterious,
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terrifying volcano?
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All right, to try and include as many of those
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keywords above as I have put on our class Ph
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on. I hope you get on all right with this.
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Everybody all right?
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Have fun.
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Speak soon, guys by for and I