crystal clear
transparent
see through
crystaline
mirror-like
clear water
green mountains / hills
emerald
lime
bumpy
olive green
mossy
grassy
Punctuation and editing..
Capital letter - Highlight in yellow
Lowercase letter - Highlight in green
Full stop - In black pen
Comma - In blue pen
Paragraph - Asterisk mark *
Incorrect spelling - Underline in red pen
'Dress them up' -
large
bulky
gigantic
enourmous
massive
humongous
big bear
Dress up the nouns using interesting adjectives...
1. big bear
2. flying cardboard box
3. yellow sky
4. clear river
5. green mountains / hills
Punctuation!
sky
yellow
golden
brown
bronze coated
sunset
gloomy
mustard sky
What do you need?
Markers, a thesaurus and your fantastic spotting skills...
- Capital letter = Fist pump
- Lowercase = Jump
- Full Stop = Turn
- Comma = Twist
- Paragraph = Karate kick!
- Incorrect spelling = Hand clap
Descriptive ideas -
Sentence challenge!
Question Time -
Write into your books...
mustard yellow sky
outrageous wind
the fresh green grass
golden clouds
brown boring cardboard box
strong blowing windmills
whirling fan
1. Who are the other people in the picture?
2. If you could fly anywhere in the world, where would you like to go?
3. What do you think it feels like to fly like a bird?
4. Why do you think the sky is the colour it is?
5. What is the bear thinking?
An article is a word that tells you whether a noun is specific or general, for example a, an, the
Circle the article(s) in each sentence below.
After an adventure he always felt tired.
We saw a magnificent sunset.
Flying over the bear during the flight wasn’t a good idea.
Can you identify the articles you have used in your writing today?
Story Starters...
1. When he closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep, his real life began. Every night his dreams would take him on the greatest adventures. It was when he was asleep that he felt most awake, most alive…
2. The giant fan whirred furiously. He pulled on the flying jacket, placed the goggles onto his head, and gripped the cardboard box for dear life. This was to be another of his incredible adventures, and he couldn’t wait to find out where it would take him…
when he klosed his eyes and drifted of to sleep his real life began every night his dreems would take him on the greatest adventures it was wen he was asleep that he felt most awake most alive
Flying
Creative Story Writing - nouns and articles
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