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Illegal and Inhumane Killing of Animals must Stop
Illégal and Inhumane Killing of Animals must Stop
Thesis Statement
"The Wildlife Preservation Committee should outlaw the hunting of endangered species in order to stop poaching, seasonal hunting, and the disobedience of the laws already in place."
Topic Sentence
Topic Sentence
To begin, laws already protect endangered species from hunting, trapping, etc.
Seasonal hunting is yet another very corrupt concept to hunting endangered species.
Equally as important, poachers are the biggest threat when it comes to the hunting of endangered animals.
Concrete Detail
2. Hunting of endangered animals is already illegal, so the people who hunt them are poachers.
1. When hunting for elephants (an endangered species), people can buy a “legal” tax stamp from the government that legalizes their hunt for the endangered species, so that revenue is made.
3. The ESA prohibits the hunting of any animal on the list of endangered species, and the bringing of dead “trophy” animals over any border to bring to another country.
Thesis Restatement
Citations
The Wildlife Preservation Committee needs change, in order to stop these killer poachers, the corrupt seasonal hunting, and the disobedience of laws in place.
Concrete Detail
2. The hunting of these animals is illegal, which makes the people hunting them poachers.
1. This seasonal hunting gives animals time to repopulate, but may not be enough time for the species to grow as a whole.
2. Outlawing the hunting can also be accompanied by guards and patrols watching animals.
1. "Hunter Safety Blog." HUNTERcourse.com. Alex Czartoryski, 28 Sept. 2011. Web. 26 Feb. 2016. (Czartoryski, 2011)
2. Phelan, GlobalPost Jessica. "6 Endangered Animals Poachers Are Hunting into Extinction." USA Today. Gannett, 31 July 2015. Web. 26 Feb. 2016. (Phelan, 2015)
3. Milmoe, Joe. "Sport-hunted Trophies." Sport-hunted Trophies. 21 Apr. 2014. Web. 26 Feb. 2016. (Milmoe, 2014)
Concrete Detail
1. Last, banning hunting as a whole would only hurt the law-abiding citizens.
2. With the seasonal hunting comes limits as too how many of the animals can be killed.
3. Law abiding citizens can be used as well to help enforce the outlawing of the hunting. People are the best ways to stop people.