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1. Count your sentences. Are there at least 8?
2. Did you transition to your next main point at the end of your paragraph?
3. Did you SHOW the reader something? [imagery, a scenario, a personal story, compare/contrast...]
4. Are there any words or phrases you repeated?
scenario/imagery
With an imbalance in the population, we will run out of room for living. The typical family home of 4 has two to three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Eternal life gives us that same family home except 24 people now live in it; that means after a meal of tacos and beans, there are 12 people praying a bathroom is available.
(1)If eternal life is bestowed upon us all, then we will continue to have additions to our population without the natural number of deaths occurring which balance it out. (2)As it stands now in America, we have almost the same birth rate and mortality rate, therefore the newborns in the maternity wing of Baptist Hospital are multiplying just as rapidly as natural causes and disease are claiming others. (3)When the balance tips towards an extreme, serious measures could be taken like China's birth limits.
birth rate will outstrip the death rate
Crowded streets and homes
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humble beginnings
empire is built on
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Make sure your triangles "progress" from one supporting point to the next!