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Week 1 Session 2
What do you do if you 'go Dutch' with someone in a restaurant?
Dutch = people born in Netherlands (Holland)
The Dutch door
Two equal halves
Being treated like the Dutch door with two equal halves
'Go Dutch' = everyone pays their own share
John's uncle 'kicked the bucket' last week. What happened to him?
Kicked the bucket: an idiom
List of the things one would do before one dies
Kicked the bucket = died
Why?
Three sayings:
People who wanted to commit suicide usually stood on a bucket with a noose around their neck. Then they kicked the bucket and died.
Three sayings:
The wooden frame that was used to hang animals up by their feet for slaughter was called a bucket so when the animals struggled, they kicked the bucket.
Three sayings:
When people died, a bucket of holy water was placed at their feet. Visitors came and they could sprinkle the deceased with holy water.
John's uncle died last week.
Why shouldn't you go to a birthday party in your 'birthday suit'?
Everyone was born naked i.e. without any clothes.
No one will go to a birthday party without clothes.
Jim's 'behind bars'. Where is he?
bars
In prison
Introduce:
Focus:
Academic writing
everything related to it e.g. summarising, paraphrasing, citation and referencing, academic grammar
5 minutes
A secondary teacher
Started working at E & L in 2010
Teaches two proficiency courses
Co-ordinates overseas programmes
Bingo!
Travelling
Eating
Reading
Any volunteer?
Any observation?
Key words/ focuses:
200 words
Summarize
Silver lining to its future
problems
16-20
Very good
Very good control of language; only very occasional errors or inappropriacies could be found.
The language marks should be based on the student's own language and/or their attempts to paraphrase.
Award 0 to language for summaries which contain large chucks of texts directly copied from the passage or summaries which are not written in paragraphs.
16-20
Very good
The summary is complete with (nearly) all key ideas identified. Ideas are presented clearly and arranged logically. No irrelevant materials are found.
Any observation?
Read the newspaper article Denmark introduces ‘Fat tax’ on foods high in saturated fat (page 6) from ABC News. Write an article of about 300 words for an OUHK student magazine expressing your view on whether Hong Kong should follow Denmark’s example and introduce a similar ‘fat tax’ to combat the increasingly serious obesity problem. Your article will be marked for: (a) task response, (b) coherence and cohesion, (c) lexical resource and (d) grammatical range and accuracy (Please refer to the marking criteria for Assignment 1 Part 2 in Appendix I). You may refer to the arguments expressed in the article but should not copy indiscriminately from it.
_Audience
Yes or no
Obesity problem
Refer to the marking criteria
Note:
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Soft copy
submit it via Online Learning Environment (OLE)
Hard copies
To avoid plagiarism:
Use your own words
Use phrases such as "According to ..."
Provide a simple reference
According to Wee (2014), ...
With reference to 'A wide berth: Will ... ' from South China Morning Post (2014), ...
A wide berth: Will Kai Tak's little used cruise terminal catch on enough to justify HK$8 billion cost? (2014, July 8). South China Morning Post. Retrieved from https://www.scmp.com/lifestyle/travel/article/1548818/will-little-used-kai-tak-cruise-terminal-catch-enough-justify-its
Noun
100%
Noun
73.91%
Noun/ Verb
65.22%/ 13.04%
Adjective/ Noun
69.57%/ 26.09%
conjunction
73.91%
Preposition/ Adverb
73.91%/ 4.35%
Pronoun (possessive adjective)
86.96%
Verb
78.26%
Adverb
82.61%
Verb/ Noun
52.17%/ 26.09%
Adjective
69.57%
Adjective
52.17%
Verb
56.52%
Conjunction
91.30%
Noun
73.91%
Conjunction
82.61%
Verb
82.61%
Pronoun (subject pronoun)
95.65%
Noun
95.65%
Adverb
78.26%
Some remarks:
Meander, blue and grin
From noun to verb
From adjective to noun
From verb to noun
Examples of Conversion
http://www.etymonline.com/
Preposition
Under the table:
Adverb
Go under the fence:
70 or above: 85%
1. How well the words are learned
2. How good your performance in proofreading will be
3. A signal for brushing up your English
Speed dating
Personality traits
Proofreading
Part of speech
Watch the news clip regarding speed dating produced by CBS and answer the questions that follow.
1. How does 8-minute dating work?
8-minute dating allows people to sign up and meet at least eight people, each for eight minutes in their towns for romance, friendship or business.
2. How much does 8-minute dating cost? What does it include?
It normally costs $30-40 for a night and it sometimes includes food, drinks and special things at the venue.
3. According to Dave, what are the advantages of 8-minute dating?
8-minute dating allows participants to actually meet people and get the chemistry feel for them. Also, the anonymous nature reduces the rejection factor.
4. What happens after the first date is over?
Participants then go to the 8-minute dating website and enter the code numbers of the people they want to see again. The computer would email contact information if matches are found.
5. What does Lisa like about Mark? What does she mean when she says 'the sparkle in his eye when he looked at me'?
Lisa thinks that Mark has a great personality. He is very bubbly, very outgoing and great to talk to. When Lisa says, 'the sparkle in his eye when he looked at me', she's referring to how Mark was attracted by her.
6. How did Mark break the ice to start a conversation with Lisa? Did it work?
Mark broke the ice by telling Lisa how beautiful she looked. It worked.
7. What are Lisa's comments about 8-minute dating?
Lisa is positive about 8-minute dating and thinks that it is something that she would try again. She finds it great to meet the person and see if there's chemistry first before going further.
How did Lisa describe Mark?
Bubbly and outgoing
Being bubbly and outgoing: two qualities of Mark
Do you know any other qualities?
6. intelligence
7. passion
8. sense of humour
9. ambition
10. confidence
1. independence
2. looks
3. optimism
4. conversational skills/communicative skills
5. sociability
Teacher-marked short writing task 1 (P. 18)
Choose two qualities you have discussed in Activity 3 and explain why men/women would look for these two qualities in a woman/man. (about 300 words)
Template (uploaded on the OLE)
Header:
Main body:
Footer:
Font and size: Times New Roman and 12
Spacing: 1.5
Submit it by
Proofreading
Summarising
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