ENGL E101F Wk 13 Ss 1_L20

Warm up exercise

For the last warm up exercise in the course, let's watch something entertaining.

Mr Brown's students are going to have their examination too.

Let's find out how Mr Brown prepared his students for it and how the students got ready for the exam.

https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x5v88ug

Reading practice

Section A:

2. Disneyland feels that it should:

a. not put shark's fin soup on the menu

b. put shark's fin soup on the menu

c. serve shark's fin soup at all wedding banquets

d. serve shark's fin soup only at extravagant wedding banquets.

decision to serve shark's fin soup

serve shark's fin soup upon request

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Section A:

1. c

2. b

3. a

4. c

5. b

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6. what do they refer to?

a. the issue (par 2)

issue

controversy

decision

plans to offer shark's fin soup

Hong Kong Disneyland's plan to offer shark's fin soup at wedding banquets

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b. the dish (par 3)

Shark's fin soup

blue shark tails

c. them (par 6)

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7. What is Disneyland's rationale for their position on shark's fin soup? Explain in your own words.

Disneyland offers shark's fin soup because

• the dish is a part of the local culture
• the provision would be necessary to attract business

Proofreading practice

1. on behalf of: a phrase

2. two ... incidents

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3. ensure vs assure

• meaning: more or less the same
• usage: different

ensure that ...

assure + someone that ...

assure + someone of something

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4. a tourist-friendly attitude

5. present participle vs past participle

'ed'/'en' form:

completed, passive

'ing' form:

going on, active

humans: 'ed'/'en' e.g. I am excited

object: 'ing' e.g. An exciting film

Proofreading practice

6. proper noun: no 'the' except the Philippines

7. passive voice: verb to be (has been) + past participle (identified)

8. has been reprimanded (passive voice) by her employer

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10. something happened in the past: overcharged

12. face criminal charges: no preposition is needed

11. 'more' placed before adjectives of the comparative degree

Patient Case Report

The most important part in the examination

In order to help you get familiar with it, a quiz is prepared for the purpose.

There are altogether 8 questions.

Questions 1 to 7 check your knowledge about the patient case report.

Patient Case Report

Question 8 checks whether you know the rules and regulations required for the report.

When marking the patient case report, we need to check whether you have followed all the rules and regulations. If not, marks will be deducted.

Therefore, in this question, you will be given a patient case report.

Patient Case Report

Read it and find out mistakes related to rules and regulations such as the flow of information in various sections.

Then you deduct 1 mark for each mistake. You also need to explain why you do so.

Patient Case Report

Here is an example.

The title is missing. The headings are not properly presented.

Patient Case Report

Therefore,

Patient Case Report

The purpose is to enhance your understanding of the requirements such as what information should be placed in which section and the flow of it.

Thus you don't have to worry about grammar.

Including Proofreading practice

Time allowed: 45 minutes

Patient Case Report

The title is missing. The headings are not properly presented.

Here is an example.

Reason for admission not in the first sentence

Irrelevant information included

Father's death

His wife's throat infection