Writing a Funnel Introduction

What is a funnel introduction?

• Inverted pyramid/triangle
• Begins with a general statement about the topic
• Follows with more specific background information about the topic
• Ends with a clear thesis statement

The Hook

• Writers often connect the topic to the reader's knowledge.
• You may not begin any of your introductions with a question!

Example 1:

The life of a teenager in modern America is not always pleasant. Teenagers are faced with a variety of conflicts and problems that seem almost impossible to overcome. Most of these problems concern school, which is not surprising, as teenagers spend an average of eight hours a day in school and school-related activities. One of the primary problems created by school is intense pressure for good grades.

Writing a Funnel Introduction

Example 3:

"Globalization has impacted all aspects of modern-day life, from a country's commerce and politics to a family's everyday decision-making strategy at the grocery store. One of the elements of globalization that is of particular interest in the field of education is study abroad programs. Host countries and institutions are eager to accept international students while the students are intrigued by the possibility of international travel. Studying abroad has become an opportunity that is available to many students, especially those at the university level. Certainly, studying abroad is not for everyone; however, for those students who experience it, the positive effects will stay with them forever." (Great Writing 4)

Example 2:

Few Americans can deny that they spend an unhealthy amount of time on their cell phones. As these devices have become more affordable and user friendly, their popularity has increased dramatically. Some might argue that their lives have improved because of access to cell phones, but others would likely disagree. It is believed that the teenaged demographic has been impacted by this technology the most. Some negative effects associated with increased cell phone use by teenagers are a lack of development of face-to-face social skills, an inability to focus on their studies, and an increased likelihood of getting into trouble.

Your Conclusion

• Your conclusion should follow an inverted funnel structure.
• Start with your restated thesis.
• Add general statements about your topic.
• Include your opinion or a prediction as your last sentence.