Structure
Background
Sets the time and context - who? where? when? what?
Record of events
Tells the audience 'what happened?'
Uses paragraphs to record events in chronological order
Must indicate or imply time period
May include causes and consequences of events
Evaluation
Evaluates or sums up the significance of the events
Activity 1
Historical Recount
Timeline activity:
'Francis Drake and the Voyage of the Golden Hind'
Arrange the paragraphs in chronological order
along the timeline
Historical recounts are the retelling of factual events that have happened in the past. They focus on significant events that involve a larger spectrum of people rather than just one person.
The social purpose: is to document and explain a series of events or period in history, and to evaluate the significance of the events.
Timeline activity
Historical Recounts
The National Literacy Strategy (2001) Year 5 Booster Units: Unit 3 Historical Recount. Retrieved from: http://dera.ioe.ac.uk/4930/3/nls_y5booster_hisrecount.pdf
References
Language features
By Emma, Kate and Michaela
- Barwick, J. (2008) Language Conventions: Year 5. Teaching Solutions: Albert Park, Australia.
- Derewianka, B. (2012) A new grammar companion for teachers. PETAA: Newtown, NSW, Australia.
- First Steps Literacy. (2013) Writing Resource Book. Department of Education: WA, Australia. Retrieved from: http://www.det.wa.edu.au/stepsresources/detcms/education/stepsresources/first-steps-literacy/writing-resource-book.en?oid=com.arsdigita.cms.contenttypes.FileStorageItem-id-13760408
- Emmit, M., Zbaracki, M., Komesaroff, l., & Pollock, J. (2010) 5th Edition. Language and Learning: An Introduction for Teaching. Oxford University Press: Victoria, Australia.
- Humphrey, S., Droga, L., & Feez. S. (2012) Grammar and Meaning. PETAA: Newtown, NSW, Australia.
- The National Literacy Strategy (2001) Year 5 Booster Units: Unit 3 Historical Recount. Retrieved from: http://dera.ioe.ac.uk/4930/3/nls_y5booster_hisrecount.pdf
- University of Saskatchewan (2011) Reference. Curtis & Cam: Saskatchewan, Canada. Retrieved from: http://linguistics.usask.ca/Ling347/webp/cohesion2/reference.html
- University of Sydney(2012) Using reference words. Retrieved from: http://writesite.elearn.usyd.edu.au/m3/m3u5/m3u5s5/m3u5s5_1.htm
- Wing Jan, L. (2009) 3rd Edition. Write Ways: Modelling Writing Forms. Oxford University Press: Victoria, Australia.
Language features include:
- Third person - writer recounts out of their direct experience
- Past tense – actions made in the past (-ed is added to most verbs)
- Common nouns - people, places and things.
- Proper nouns - specific people, places, times and events.
- Action verbs - doing words (words to describe actions)
- Relating verbs - words that link two pieces of information.
- Prepositions - locators in time and space
- Connectives - sequencing and linking words
- References - referring words
Child example
What are the strengths and weaknesses of this child's historical recount?
Consider what you have learnt today:
- Purpose
- Structure
- Language Features
Refer to your posters for guidance
Reference
Creates cohesion in texts.
References are words that refer to other words or concepts that have already appeared or will appear in the text.
May be used to avoid unnecessary repetition in the text.
Activity 2
Categories
Activity 2
Types of references
Reference Activity: 'The Eureka Stockade'
Your task is to fill in the blanks with the missing 'reference' words.
Exophoric: references that point outwards from the text
Endophoric: references that point in towards the text.
- Anaphoric (links back to something already introduced)
- Cataphoric (Refers forward in the text to something that has not yet been introduced)
- Personal (using personal & possessive pronouns)
Eg, it, he, her, they, his, theirs
- Demonstrative (points at specific things being referred to)
Eg, there, these, here, this
- Comparative (relation of contrast between referring words)
Eg, other, same, similarly, more, less
Eg, the
Eg, this and these
Barwick, J. (2008) Language Conventions: Year 5. Teaching Solutions: Albert Park, Australia