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Week 2: Friday

Get into Pairs and exchange papers.

Use the handout to guide discussion

Free Write

Describe- Evaluate- Suggest

  • Write about your past experiences with peer feedback

  • What worked? What didn't?

  • What would you change?

What's Next?

Objective

  • Mediated Values Essay is due Tuesday, September 11, at 11:59 pm

  • Chapter 4: (pp. 39-52)

  • “The Female Thor and the Female Comic- Book Reader" by Noah Berlatsky (Blackboard)
  • Work with peers to revise rough drafts

  • Address concerns about the Mediated Values Essay

  • Address revision techniques

  • Students to feel confident about the upcoming Essay

Is revision a helpful strategy for you?

What strategies do you think help when you are revising?

Questions to consider when Revising

Tips for Revision

  • Have you clearly addressed the prompt?

  • Is your claim clear throughout the entire essay? If not find the places it is not and revise those sections.

  • Do your body paragraphs support the claim you've made?

  • Do your topic sentences guide your body paragraph
  • Listen to peer feedback and try to incorporate it into your next draft.

  • Reread your paper and highlight sections you think you can improve upon.

  • Copy and paste your paper to google translate and have it read back to you. This can help you find sentences that sound strange.

  • Take a break when you don't know what else to do and then come back with fresh eyes
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