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MACH 3 ID - Elevator Pitch

Pitch analysis

Nancy T. Wheeler, 2012 BPC Elevator Pitch Winner

Video

Ethos, Logos, Pathos

Ethos

ETHOS

  • Self-confidence

  • Credibility and expertise on the topic (accurate data)

"Every 3,5 seconds a property crime is committed in the US."

Logos

LOGOS

  • Description of how the app works

  • Knowledge about the product she promotes and competitors

  • Statistics mentioned (households, risks and accidents)

Pathos

Pathos

  • Connection with the audience

  • Public feels concerned

  • Use of "you" to interact with the public

  • Emotional part ; "In the time I have been talking, seventeen property crimes have occurred"

Body Language

Body

language

  • Intense eye contact with the audience

  • Words are punctuated by gestures

  • Insistence on number with her fingers

  • Mime of the expression "take a picture" with her hands.

  • Smiling and confident gestures

Rhetorical devices

Alliteration ; "- Disasters, fires and floods"

Rhetorical question : "Would you know exactly what you lost if your house burned down ?"

Caesura : "None of our competitors offer the complete system we provide"

Amplification : "NOT LoJack, NOT Snag", "Nineteen returns"

Antithesis : "In the time I’ve been talking, seventeen property crimes have occurred"

Slogan ; "Mock 3 ID – ID your life"

What can be improved ?

  • Mention the name of the speaker and the connection to the business

  • Look at your business from the perspective of your clients

  • Do not forget the call to auction
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