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AUTOMATED WRITING EVALUATION REVIEW

Group 2

Pham Bao Anh

Nguyen Hong Hanh

Vo Thi Truc Quynh

Nguyen Lam Phuong Thao

Introduction

Advances in AI in recent years have led to availability of tools and services for writing.

are having a profound effect on education in general, and on language learning and teaching.

Introduction

While widely used in everyday life and work, the use of digital writing tools in instructed language learning has been

Digital tools development

◊Tools for Automatic Writing Evaluation (AWE)

originally designed for essay assessment (spelling and grammar checking) => identifying writing problems + suggesting areas needing revision

Synchronous corrective feedback

The development

  • available in stand-alone tools
  • integrated into word processors

Machine translation (MT)

provides high-quality and reliable translations in many language combinations

AI-enabled incorporation

  • auto-completion of phrases into text editors
  • online writing venues
  • suggestions for alternative wording

Advances through

AI systems

Significant breakthroughs:

AI systems

  • Natural language processing (NLP)
  • Natural language understanding

Controversy

- Language educators may be concerned about:

  • the authenticity of submitted student writing
  • the absence of learning accompanying copy and paste assignment completion

controversial

- AI systems built on large large language models (GPT-3) enable a host of language devices (translation, essay writing)

(Dale, 2021)

- Generated texts by these systems are unique, on-demand creations

=> undetectable by anti-plagiarism tools

(Eaton et al., 2021)

Suggestions

- It may be time to learn to live with the reality of students' access to advanced writing assistance, and find ways to provide appropriate guidance.

Suggestions

- Critical analyses of AI-powered writing assistance can provide linguistic insights deriving from seeing the limitations in AI’s understanding of human language in all its contextual and pragmatic complexity.

- Through the interaction of software, learner interations, and teacher mediation, a complex learning environment is created.

Current and Emerging AI-Enabled Writing Assistance

AI-Enabled Writing Assistance

Current and Emerging AI-Enabled Writing Assistance

- Automatic writing evaluation systems (Criterion, MY Access!, or Pigai) are used principally in academic settings.

- Synchronous text editors (Grammarly or ProWritingAid) are more recent and widely used in educational, professional, and everyday environments.

- Translation services (Google Translate) are now available in various formats and on different devices.

- Automatic text generators (Google Compose) suggest wording improvement, or even generate entire texts when given a topic/prompt (GPT-3).

Current & emerging AI-Enabled Writing Assisstance

Automated Writing Evaluation

- AWE is widely used today, in both L1 and L2 educational environments, and at all levels of instruction.

- Writing = a complex endeavor = low level (spelling, mechanics) + higher-level skills related to content organization, logical sequencing, and stylistic appropriateness.

Automated Writing Evaluation

- Writing in an L2 presents its own special set of challenges, deriving from possible deficiencies (lexical, syntactic, pragmatic, or rhetorical knowledge)

Corrective feedback (CF)

  • Providing useful CF = a difficult task
  • CF, if appropriately applied, is beneficial.

Corrective feedback

Effectiveness

Effectiveness of AWE

- AWE systems provide fast and consistent CF.

- The resources offered can be voluminous compared to teacher-supplied feedback, as auxiliary writing resources are often integrated.

(Grimes & Warschauer, 2010; Hussein et al., 2019)

- AWE systems track revisions + offer CF for each draft, while maintaining data on changes.

- AWE system can identify areas of improvement => providing insight for writer into characteristics of good writing => developing metacognitive knowledge

- AWE can supply a useful framework for deliberate practice => motivating effect.

Effectiveness of AWE

- If implemented in a contextual appropriate manner, AWE programs can have a positive effect on the quality of students' writing.

- Variables include:

  • the nature of the instructional support
  • the attitudes and activities of the teacher towards the use of AWE
  • the amount of practice afforded students
  • student characteristics (proficiency level, the writing/editing stage at which AWE is used)
  • student beliefs about the validity and usefulness of AWE

- AWE feedback is most useful at the early stages. The revisions most commonly made are in grammatical accuracy and lexical appropriateness.

Limitations of AWE systems

Limitations

understanding of nature of writing

Instead of improving writing skills and L2 development, AWE tools tend to be used by students in a proofreading orientation.

(Ranalli, 2021)

best with essay, limited in other genres

improving areas

AWE provides ◊little assistance with improving areas (argumentation strength, discourse coherence, or organization)

Natural language understanding in AWE-based systems is built on leveraging statistical analysis, large data collection, and machine learning to determine the likelihood of text sequencing.

As a result of the parameters set in AWE systems, they tend not to value originality or creativity, but rather language mechanics, often privileging length and syntactical complexity over succinctness and clarity, or more intangible, humanistic features.

(Bridgeman & Ramineni, 2017; Y. Huang & Wilson, 2021)

Research on AWE

Research on AWE

Research on AWE is increasingly recognizing these limitations as problematic.

- Researchers are themselves affiliated with the companies selling the products => influenced early studies that emphasize the reliability of the systems and their alignment with human raters

=> Systematic, critical studies could improve the utility of AWE research.

- AWE studies generally fail to take advantage of the data collection capabilities of AWE software.

=> Methods used in data mining and clustering techniques could be effectively used in AWE studies

AWCF Tools

(Text Editors Supplying Synchronous Feedback)

- AWCF tools = real-time automated written corrective feedback services (Grammarly, Ginger, ProWritingAid, etc.)

AWCF Tools

- AWCF focuses exclusively on lower-level writing issues, particularly grammatical and lexical errors.

- Grammarly represents a new and distinct genre of writing-support technology. (Dale & Viethen, 2021; Ranalli & Yamashita, 2022)

- Grammarly = an AWCF tool that

(1) can work as standalone tool

(2) is integrated into existing writing tools (Microsoft Word or Google Docs)

(3) can work as a web browser extension or as a virtual keyboard in smartphones.

- Grammarly has both strengths and weaknesses that affect users’ experience.

Advantages

Speed of feedback

Versatility in access options

Free cost

Ease of use

Topic

Gains in lexical diversity & grammatical accuracy

Helpful error classification

Helpful plagiarism detection

Improved writing

Disadvantages

Source of distraction and frustration

False positives & negatives

Wording is oversimplified or too technical

Feedback is too repetitious or voluminous

Topic

More suitable for advanced learners

No differentiation between

L1 & L2

Feedback is specific rather than generic

Working memory overloaded

Machine Translation (MT)

Machine Translation

- Use of MT in educational settings = controversial.

=> commonly banned by language teachers.

(1) cheating

(2) decrease in the need for FL teachers.

Implication

- Typically, L2 students use MT to look up words or phrases, not the whole text.

Convenience

Speed

- Recent studies found that virtually all students surveyed used MT (mostly Google Translate) for learning tasks in instructed language learning.

- Along with Grammarly, Google Translate seems to have become a ubiquitous helper for students writing in an L2.

Availability

Free cost

Advantages

Disadvantages

- Reductionist perception of language in which human language can be simply

- Improved writing quality through the use of MT integrated into learning tasks (Fredholm, 2014, 2015, 2019; E. M. O’Neill, 2016, 2019)

reencoded based on a one-to-one correspondence between languages.

- Training in post-editing machine-translated texts = helpful in correcting raw MT output and in gaining insight into MT limitations.

- Students may see Google Translate as an “answer key,” pointing to a simplistic view of language (Ryu, 2022).

- Instrumentalist view of language “fails to acknowledge the richness and complexity of human interaction, identity, and culture” (Urlaub & Dessein, 2022)

- Developing the skills to post-edit requires focused attention and advanced reading ability, valuable both in language learning and in professional translation (H. Zhang and Torres-Hostench, 2022).

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- MT captures the semantic dimension of language but misses the nuances and the context-dependent essence of human communication.

- MT into the classroom = leveraging students’ L1 in the learning process and contrasting its usage patterns with the L2.

Implication

- The use of MT for views on the nature of language may lead to a reconsideration of the goals of language education generally (Vinall & Hellmich, 2022).

- The availability of advanced writing and translation tools, linguistic accuracy “can no longer be viewed as a synonym of learning and excellence” (Klekovkina & Denié-Higney, 2022)

Topic

- If MT were capable of capturing the total essence of a language, that will reduce language to an instrumental role.

- Machine Translation will perhaps suffice for transactional language needs, but will hardly be a substitute for genuine person-to-person encounters (Godwin-Jones, 2019).

Automatic

Text

Generation

Automatic Text Generation

The ability of AI systems to write on their own.

Language models

AI systems built from collections of data that are analyzed by machine learning

--> An ability to deal with human language in many effective ways

Language modeling involves predicting the next word in a text given the previous words (Ruder, 2018)

Predictive text technology

The ability of AI systems to write on their own

Language models

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Unsupervised learning

Supervised learning

Topic

The systems were trained on sets of labeled data and limited to specific domains.

The systems are considered to be “pre-trained,” and can be used in a variety of domains.

OpenAI developed generative pre-trained (GPT) language model.

sentence completion suggestions

auto-completion options

GPT-3 - Latest version of language model

- Released in 2021

spelling and grammar checking

text prediction

rewriting options

- Provided writing tools with automatic text generation

Topic

--> “Biggest transformation of writing since word processors”

(Floridi & Chiriatti, 2020, p. 691)

predictive-text capabilities

(Dizon & Gayed, 2021)

Benefits of GPT-3 based writing tools

  • On target

  • Indistinguishable from those written by humans, particularly in terms of flow and textual coherence (Dale and Viethen, 2021,p. 516).
  • Do not require training in either content or genre

Pros

  • Generate texts in a variety of languages (Floridi & Chiriatti, 2020)

  • Generate extended discourse in a variety of genres in almost any content area (Godwin-Jones, 2021)
  • Compose poetry, write computer code, translate text, do summarizations, correct grammar, power chatbots and much more (Dale, 2021).

Limitations of GPT-3 based writing tools

  • Authorship is thus shared between humans and machines, raising the questions of authenticity, creativity, and attribution.

--> Language educators will face the challenge of assessing such written work.

  • Automatic writing evaluation systems are unlikely to evaluate texts generated automatically by AI systems.

Cons

  • It does not have a real knowledge of the text it is generating, and “has not met expectations in natural language reasoning” (M. Zhang and Li, 2021, p. 832).
  • The dataset is found on the Internet, including biased views and hateful language (Godwin-Jones, 2021) which will find its way into generated texts.

Classroom integration

The use of text generators, MT and AWE/AWCF tools poses both

opportunities and challenges

to writing teachers and L2 educators.

Since such tools have become a

(Hellmich & Vinall, 2021, p. 4)

“naturalized part of the modern, globalized world”

Classroom Integration

rejecting or ignoring their existence is uncceptable.

Thoughtful, informed differentiation in the use of different AI-enabled tools, based on situated practice, established goals, and desired outcomes, is needed.

Recommendations

  • The use of those tools should not be determined by convenience, but rather by how they fit into pedagogical and curricular objectives (Z. Li, 2021).

Recommendations

  • Artificial intelligence writing tools should not “distract students from the communicative purpose of writing”. That entails integrating tool use "into a broader writing program emphasizing authentic communication”. (Grimes & Warschauer, 2010, p. 34).

--> Having students use writing tools in everyday communicative activities in the classroom

Ways to integrate

Ways to integrate

AWCF/AWE tools

- Have learners examine their own compositions for a particular type of error.

- Let them run their writing through an AWCF tool to see if it flags errors in that grammatical category.

(John and Woll, 2020)

Topic

- Have students perform a review of AWE feedback, critically examining its effectiveness and usefulness.

- Supply students with a text to proof, identifying errors and providing corrections.

(Ranalli, 2021)

Google Translation

- Assign writing assignments which incorporate specific materials currently or previously studied in the course.

- Ask students to identify and label the examples, using a checklist of specific grammar or vocabulary.

Note: Grading rubrics used in that study are made with the use of Google Translate, as they include identification of grammar and vocabulary.

(Knowles, 2022)

Topic

- Asks students to discuss the sociopragmatic issues involved in the translation of a given text (i.e., “what’s your name?”).

(Pellet and Myers, 2022)

Explicit instruction and guidance in the use of AI tools

- Guidance:

+ How AI-based systems work

+ What kind of writing they are best used for

+ What kind of performance one is likely to expect.

--> Building familiarity & confidence

Topic

- Students should develop realistic expectations

of utility in tool choice and use.

--> Help with appropriate use of language tools

Ecological Perspectives

Social informatics - one way to break down the separation among people, technology, and organizations (Grimes and Warschauer, 2010).

AWE systems are considered sociocultural artifacts mediated through teacher and student use (Jang et. al, 2020).

Ecological Perspectives

The use of AWE necessarily impacts not only student writing but also the nature of teacher CF.

Providing feedback

Artificial Intelligence tools can help to develop student writing skills, but that needs to be, as Y. Huang & Wilson (2021) state, a supporting, not leading role.

Feedback plays an important role in improving students's writing skill.

Providing feedback

Teachers use AI tools as pedagogical tools are likely to be using a variety of other strategies as well for providing feedback.

Teacher feedback

Researchers emphasize the importance of teachers’ feedback on students writing (Y. Huang & Wilson, 2021; Z. Li, 2021). Link et al. (2020)

Teacher feedback

An ideal hybrid situation of having both the AWE tool and the teacher comment on students’ performance.

An AWE tool will provide sentence-level feedback while the teacher attends to higher-order writing issues.

--> Optimize the time teacher spends on correcting each writing

Peer feedback

Combining AWE with peer review is an additional option (Hockly, 2019).

Peer feedback

Mechanisms for including peer review: Criterion and MI Write

Peer-to-peer interactions: Google Translate

Factors affecting the use of AI tools

AWE inevitably changes the ecology of a learning and instructional system.

Factors affecting the use of AI tool

Learning environment

The same tool used in different environments is likely to have widely different results.

Learning environment

Some aspects that should be taken into considerations:

Individual Classroom

Department Institution

Time

Individuals

Individual teacher differences that can play a major role (Link et al., 2020) as well as student characteristics (Y. Huang & Wilson, 2021; Ranalli, 2021)

Individuals

The use of AWE systems shows widely different patterns of emergence through the individual students followed.

Engagement in such a system is “complex and multi-faceted” and therefore can vary considerably.

Human-machine relationship

There is likely to be a range of attitudes and reactions to the technology.

- Enthusiastic acceptance

Human-machine relationship

- Utter rejection

- Many stages in between.

Trust

The issue of trust is raised in Ranalli (2021) as a central factor in student reception of AWE feedback.

subjective perceptions about individual workload

the nature of the interaction with the software

other considerations

Trust

A central role in the degree of engagement a user has with the technology tool

Conclusion

- AI Writing tools will be used by many students.

- It is necessary for teachers to find ways for students to use the tools appropriately.

Conclusion

- Learning to use AI writing tools is important for L2 learners and their lives after graduation.

Suggestions

For AI tools

For building trust

- Greater transparency

--> diminishing concerns among teachers as well as building a higher level of trust with users.

- Add flexibility of use

- Provide errors highlighted only in mode

- Help L2 writers with using collocations appropriately

- Aim to feed-forward

AI tools in education

- Both learners and teachers will be co-creating with algorithmic systems.

- To do that equitably, designing for learning will need to view AI tools from a broader, social perspective and consider the impact on individual lives.

Thank you for listening!

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