...ing, ...ed 27.02.18

Review...

To provide additional information, using a subordinate clause

The rules:

• Complete success criteria - what do you need for an ing, ed sentence?
• Read your sentences
• Correct any errors
• Check each sentence against criteria - add anything missing
• Choose one sentence to improve

Book activity...

Red - 6 ing, ed sentences - challenge add a 2a phrase, a list phrase and a simile

Blue - 6 ing, ed sentences

What do we know about subordinate clauses?

Let's apply this...

Yellow - LC - 5 ing, ed sentences using sentence strips as starters

Basic Skills:

• Capital letter
• Full stop
• HFW spelled correctly

Green - LC - 5 ing, ed sentences using sentence strips as starters

ing, ed sentences:

• 'ing' verb
• Location
• Comma
• 'ed' verb - what did you do?
• Relevant to travelling through the corridor?

Things to help - word mats, images, plans, sentence strips

Paragraph 2 -

You know is something is wrong.

You are going to journey through the corridor to the control room.

You need to begin to build up the tension.

Today we are going to produce a paragraph describing our journey through the corridor...

Remember...

ing, ed sentences:

• 'ing' verb
• Location
• Comma
• 'ed' verb - what did you do?
• Relevant to a volcano erupting

Basic Skills:

• Capital letter
• Full stop
• HFW spelled correctly

What might you be doing in the corridor?

Table activity...

Your paragraph...

They don't need to be in this order

Questions to answer...

• What are you doing?
• How do you feel?
• What can you see? (At least 2 things)
• Where do you pass?
• What can you hear?
• How do you know there is danger?

They don't need to be in this order

1. Whiteboards

2. Self Review

3. Books

Sentence types

• ing, ed
• the more, the more
• 2a
• de:de
• 3 ed

Your turn

Blue sentence strip - 'ing' verb and phrase

Example...

Green sentence strip - 'ed' verb and phrase

What features can you spot?

Put your comma between

Swap

Find the best

As I ran through the corridor, the deafening siren grew louder and louder. The cold, bleak corridors were bright-white, it took my eyes a little while to adjust. Pressing my hand against the recognition pad, I glanced behind me to check if anyone was following. The stench of poisonous gas started to follow me. I placed my thick space suit over my face: the fumes were making it difficult for me to breathe. The more I thought about the dangers, the more I wished I was still at home. Worried, scared and frightened, I ran closer to the control room. Running towards the locked doors, I gasped at the panic that was surrounding me. The lights started flickering, I new something was wrong, I felt like I was in a horror movie. Exhausted and nervous, sweating and panicked, I still carried on the dangerous mission.

Tuesday 27th February 2018

L.O. To use the past progressive tense.

To use ing, ed sentences accurately

Our Turn...

Review...

Let's write one together...

Basic Skills:

• Capital letter
• Full stop
• HFW spelled correctly

ing, ed sentences:

• 'ing' verb
• Location
• Comma
• 'ed' verb - main clause
• Relevant to volcano erupting?

1. Check ours

ing, ed sentences

Erupting into the darkened sky,

smoke filled the helpless village..

What features can you spot?

To be able to write ing, ed sentences, we need to think of different verbs...

ing ed

Your turn...

Can you write a sentence in the past progressive tense?

ing, ed sentences

As Y3 writers, we need to write complex sentences which use the past progressive tense - we can do this by using ing, ed sentences.

Review

Share with your partner - does it have 'was' and '...ing'?

Examples...

• Exploding into the air,
• Filling the sky,
• Crumbing to the ground,

lolly sticks

What is the past progressive tense?

It indicates continuing action, something that was happening, going on, at some point in the past.

was... ...ing

Escape from Pompeii...

Here's an ending

thick, black smoke filled the air.

How could you start it?

1. Check yours

2. Check your partners

Here's an opener...

Escaping from the city,