19.10.17
L.O. To be able to write a story.
Go and write paragraph one - using the sentences on your whiteboard into your books
Paragraph 2...
- What did he do when he got into the room? Double ly
- What did he do with the egg? 2a
- What came out of the egg and where did it go?
- How did the little girl feel? How do you know this?
- What did the dream giver do next? Double ly
Paragraph 1
Things to think about...
- Fronted adverbial - night
- What was he doing?
- Where was he looking for?
- What did he have hold of?
- Where did he land? and how?
- How did he get in? Can you describe his hands/eyes/fingers?
- What did he do when he got in?
- Where did he put his bag?
Today we are going to start writing our story of the Dream Giver
Things to remember...
Check your work...
Go and write paragraph one - using the sentences on your whiteboard into your books
Sentence types
- Doubly ly
- Simile
- 2a
- 4a
- Fronted Adverbial
- ___ing, ___ed
Can you use your story map and tell your new partner the story?
The Dream Giver
My Version...