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    Hi everyone, I would like to talk today about my revising and editing process.

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    Firstly I would like to talk about who will be critiquing my draft.

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    Secondly I would like to talk about my expected timeline,

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    the person who will be critiquing my draft his name as johann von Karman.

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    He is a paramedic instructor in R. C. A. In new york city

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    and a paramedic and Maimonides hospital in new york city to

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    I feel like he would be great doing so.

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    Um he could use his medical expertise to help me with the accuracy of my information

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    and he could help me with my writing skills,

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    valuing my writing skills with the skills he has as a teacher.

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    Secondly I would like to talk about my expected timeline

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    February three. I would like to share my draft with the opener. Carmen

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    February six, I would like to receive the feedback

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    back.

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    Yeah,

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    February 6th February 11. I would like to revise and edit my paper, February 11.

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    I would like to submit my final paper