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Hi everyone, I would like to talk today about my revising and editing process.
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Firstly I would like to talk about who will be critiquing my draft.
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Secondly I would like to talk about my expected timeline,
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the person who will be critiquing my draft his name as johann von Karman.
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He is a paramedic instructor in R. C. A. In new york city
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and a paramedic and Maimonides hospital in new york city to
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I feel like he would be great doing so.
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Um he could use his medical expertise to help me with the accuracy of my information
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and he could help me with my writing skills,
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valuing my writing skills with the skills he has as a teacher.
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Secondly I would like to talk about my expected timeline
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February three. I would like to share my draft with the opener. Carmen
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February six, I would like to receive the feedback
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back.
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Yeah,
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February 6th February 11. I would like to revise and edit my paper, February 11.
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I would like to submit my final paper