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Question 3
Final Improvements
Question 3
What have you learned from your audience feedback
How audience feedback has helped me improve my product
The editing of my film was finished properly at this stage, with the final tweaks being made to the sound, such as by adding a heartbeat to create tension. The logos for both of the movie studios, Warner Bros and the fictional Olympic Productions have been added as it is a key feature of nearly every modern trailer
Overall, the feedback I have received when presenting the 1st and second versions of my trailer has been beneficial, as It helped me correct errors I may not have noticed or give me ideas for how to make it a better trailer overall . Without the feedback, my trailer would likely have several editing mistakes and key conventions missing
Jamie Pears
The second draft reception
Improvements made based on second draft feedback
When I had finished my improvements to my film, I yet again received some feedback from my peers and teacher. There were more minor changes that needed to be made with regards to my editing as well as some shots that overall served no purpose in the trailer.
The feedback mostly regarded my overall thematic story I'm trying to tell through the trailer, and how I could better showcase this. I did this by removing shots that did not add anything to the trailer and were mostly filler. I also used the application "Keynote to add my own personal production logo with its intro animation at the start of the trailer.
How I responded to the first draft feedback
Initial First draft reception
The Improvement to my editing
When I begun my filming I showed my 1st draft to my peers and my teacher. The reception was good, and I was given ways in which I could improve my work, such as by using better cuts and editing as well as adding more shots.
I immediately set plans to film some more, in order to improve upon some of my shots and add more to the trailer. Another piece of feedback was with regards to my editing and how I could improve my use of I-movie and other application software
When approaching my second draft, I had a set of different editorial improvements to make, and these included making a less generic looking font for my title, improvements to the timings of sounds and cuts to black, and finally to add the rest of the standard conventions of a trailer that I had not yet done such as production logos and the cast list.