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Copy of Persuasive paper Outline

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Daniella Castaneda

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Persuasive paper Outline Foster care system What are the different sides to this topic? Who are the opposing sides? Daniella Castaneda What is your opinion about the topic? Explain. What persuasive Techniques are your going to use to convince your audience of your opinion? Information you have found in research Source/Citation #1 Source/Citation #2 Source/Citation #3 What was the important Information you took from this article? What was the important Information you took from this article? What was the important Information you took from this article? Thesis Statement Although kids are taken away from their families for violents problems kids are better in foster care because they may be physically hurt, they might suffer psychological problems, and kids will be cared for and have a better future. Introduction/Hook About 400,000 kids are in foster care due to abuse and neglect across the United States. Child Protective Services may be separating families but it may be the right thing to do. Children could get physically abused by their parents. Its possible that they suffer mental problems while living with their violent yet biological parents. Foster care may help this kids to be well take cared of and will have a more guaranteed future if treated well. Conclusion Body Paragraph #1 Body Paragrpah #2 Body Paragraph #3 Quote from source Quote From Source Quote from source Some believe that the foster care system are stealing children from their families in an unwarranted fashion. Others believe that children of abuse or neglect are safer in foster care. My opinion about the foster care system is that children who are abused and tortured are better in foster care. exaggeration
repetition That is not to say that what is in the best interests of the child are synonymous with what the child wants; that is to say, that how they feel, while twisting helplessly in the winds of adult choices, should matter. Children look at their parents with love, even when they are injured. They hope their parents will change. They believe their parents will change; even when their lip is bleeding, the hope is greater than the fear."

I know, from personal experience, so many children who should never go home. I also know, from that same experiential view, that the foster care system is inundated with children in need, underfunded, understaffed; the number of good foster homes cannot stand up to the amount of children in danger. I know that institutions are rife with people who take pleasure in the control of others in an environment away from public view, where the children are not to be believed, because they are damaged. I know that some caseworkers care but have no time and some caseworkers have no time to care. As with any group, there are good parents and bad parents, good caseworkers and bad caseworkers, good foster homes and bad foster homes. To say that one or the other is definitively good or bad is to wear your rose colored glasses while spouting unsupportable facts" " " Children who are violently abused such as hit, kicked, or burned are put into foster homes.Physical abuse is the most common type known and used in the U.S. Kids who are the most abused are 4 years or younger and they shouldn't need to got through this terrifying thing that may ruin their life permanently. This is why i believe children who are mistreated should be placed with a good foster parent. "According to the National Child Abuse and Neglect Data System (NCANDS), in 2005, an estimated 3.3 million reports of alleged abuse and/or neglect involving approximately 6 million children were made to local child protective services (CPS) agencies across the country. An estimated 899,000 of these children were determined to be victims of abuse and/or neglect (USDHHS, 2007)". Many children are placed in foster care to help their families but them as well. When they are mentally abused they create the sense less self-worth than anybody less. The abused child feels unsafe and fears their parents. They will usually be aggressive and unstable and might need a therapist at a very young age. Psychological problems can be caused by poor parenting skills or harsh punishments and should be taken care of by being put in foster care by Child Protective Services. "All children experience a great deal of transitional stress when they are first contacted by the children's authority in the county for the purpose of removing them from the home. It is my experience as a therapist for these children that they usually vividly remember the details of the day they are removed. Whether the caseworker comes to the home or the school or the police are involved, the scene is not good for anyone, but is a necessary step in the protection process and also begins the healing process. These transitional episodes can leave an emotional mark on the child, creating apprehension and anxiety, but this is alleviated to a moderate degree once the child becomes familiar and comfortable with the foster parent resource". Foster care can also help kids get a brighter and better future. There are many programs to give scholarships to foster kids. These children are taken to a foster home where there wont be any violence or aggression. Children will be able to study and play with other kids their age there. Where they can be loved and cared but at firdt it might be difficult but better for them. "For the half million foster children* in the United States, paying for college presents formidable challenges. Fortunately, several programs initiate scholarships, grants and loans that are exclusively available to the subset of students who are adopted or currently in foster care." Foster care is a better option for kids who are abused and tortured daily. Parents who are addicted to drugs or are aggressive might need time to recover without their children to see the pain they go through. Watching all this violence has made children into murderers. This violence and mental problems can come up to this and may ruin their lifes and of others. Im decided that foster care can be a much better place for kids and can lead them to a better future. Louderman, Richard, et al. "Children Are in Foster Care Because of Parents' Substance Abuse." Foster Care. Ed. Debra Bloom. Detroit: Greenhaven Press, 2010. At Issue. Rpt. from "Integrating Substance Abuse Treatment and Child Welfare Services: Findings from the Illinois Alcohol and Other Drug Abuse Waiver Demonstration." Social Work Research 30 (June 2006): 95-106. Gale Opposing Viewpoints In Context. Web. 11 Jan. 2013 Naccarato, Toni, and Liliana Hernández. "Foster Children Still Need Support as They Reach Adulthood." Foster Care. Ed. Debra Bloom. Detroit: Greenhaven Press, 2010. At Issue. Rpt. from "Kicking Kids Out of Foster Care: A Federal Program to Help Young People Falls Short." ColorLines 11 (2008): 14-15. Gale Opposing Viewpoints In Context. Web. 11 Jan. 2013. http://ic.galegroup.com/ic/ovic/ViewpointsDetailsPage/ViewpointsDetailsWindow?failOverType=&query=&prodId=OVIC&windowstate=normal&contentModules=&mode=view&displayGroupName=Viewpoints&limiter=&currPage=&disableHighlighting=true&displayGroups=&sortBy=&source=&search_within_results=&zid=&action=e&catId=&activityType=&scanId=&documentId=GALE%7CEJ3010606204&userGroupName=san26511&jsid=f0d3fcba04998ebf536e73623b374bf4 The most important thing about this is that people are helping foster children in foster care. i found important that it says that kids are better in foster care i thought that they need to be cared of well too
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