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Perfect Paragraph

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Mary Kirby

on 27 February 2013

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Transcript of Perfect Paragraph

adapted from the Jane Schaffer Writing Program Creating the Perfect Paragraph Concrete Details Commentary Creating a "chunk" Facts
Specific reference
The "what really happened" Analysis
The "so what" Subject/writing task specific
Other areas - 2CD:1CM Later the pigs altered the rule to say that all animals are equal but some are more equal than others (CD). This shows that the pigs are beginning to change the rules to favor themselves. The pigs see themselves as privileged over the other animals (CM). Putting It Together In Animal Farm, Clover represents a caring and motherly figure to the other animals(TS). She talks to Mollie, the horse, when others will not(CD). She isn’t mean to Mollie but wants her to understand how her decision to leave may affect the farm(CM). Clover wants to keep the animals together for the good of the farm. In addition, Clover warns Boxer to slow down and nurses him when he collapses(CD). In her concern for him she models the kind of behavior that the animals wanted for Mr. Jones but did not get(CM). She sees the injustice of the system and understands the punishment of hard work(CM). Clover works hard to help the other animals regardless of what the negative consequences may be(CS). http://www.slideserve.com/mathilde/jane-schaffer-writing-program#sthash.RWqGIkav.dpuf
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