Rough Draft Critique

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  1. Hi, everybody.
  2. You should be watching this video if you are prepared
  3. to complete a critique of your rough draft for the
  4. Rad American History Project.
  5. If you are not prepared to critique your rough draft,
  6. then you are watching the wrong video.
  7. Please return to the Oberoi Post and select the correct
  8. video based on your progress so far, if you are
  9. critiquing each other's rough draft for you and your partner,
  10. that means that both of you have a rough draft
  11. that is complete.
  12. That is 4 to 5 paragraphs and is ready to
  13. get some feedback from a pier.
  14. As you and your partner work on the critique, I
  15. want you to follow the following instructions to help in
  16. your rough draft critique of one another.
  17. First, I want you to trade papers, and I want
  18. each of you to read the others Rough Draft.
  19. See how much each other has done and see if
  20. it helps you get a better understanding of the other
  21. person's topic.
  22. Reading someone else's work can also help give you ideas
  23. of how to make your own work even better than
  24. it already is.
  25. So that's why the first step of this critique is
  26. to read each other's rough drafts.
  27. Then I want you to discuss each other's rough draft
  28. by providing some cool and warm feedback.
  29. Remember, feedback should always be helpful and kind, so make
  30. sure that you're providing each other helpful and kind, cool
  31. and warm feedback on your progress so far, with the
  32. rough draft, you will be able to use that information
  33. from your partner to help.
  34. You do even better on the final draft.
  35. That's why we're doing this critique activity.
  36. You will also be discussing what strengths exist in one
  37. another's papers and what improvements your partner could make to
  38. make them the best that they could possibly be.
  39. The goal of these critique activities is to help each
  40. other become better writers and to help each other really
  41. have your rough draft in a really good spot going
  42. into next week.
  43. Next week you will have a lot of time to
  44. revise your rough drafts a synchronously, and you also have
  45. a day to work on them in class with me.
  46. Lastly, you need to complete the 3 to 1 that
  47. is located in a bre.
  48. With that 3 to 1, you will complete it based
  49. on the critique that you did with your partner today
  50. and submit it before the end of class.
  51. Um, the way that you're being graded for this assignment
  52. is in part the 321 and also from me checking
  53. in on you.
  54. I'm gonna be in and out of all of your
  55. meetings so that I can help answer any questions, help
  56. make sure you guys air staying on track and that
  57. you're using your time as wisely as possible.
  58. That's all the instructions for this video, so please be
  59. sure to follow them.
  60. Remember giving read each other's papers, give each other warm
  61. and cool, helpful kind feedback, and complete the 32 months
  62. I look forward to listening into your critique sessions and
  63. thio helping you guys become the best that you could
  64. possibly be.
  65. Thanks for watch