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Chapter 1
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Hi everyone and welcome to session four of our course.
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I hope that you all are having a great week and things are going well for you.
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If you are joining us because you were sick this week and
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miss class then I hope that you are on the mend.
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So this week we're looking at Chapter five.
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So if you've not read that, I want you to be sure to read chapter five
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and um we're gonna be looking at the steps in the many lessons so
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when we planned for writing these are the steps that we want to follow.
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There is a power point in canvas that you can open
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and I'll be going through that kind of small right here.
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Um You can open it in canvas and see it a little better.
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I will tell you that somehow it doesn't translate well to canvas so it looks messy
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but the first light is just our schedule yesterday.
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So if you were on campus we had a very busy three hours.
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Mhm.
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Our targets for this week are these three
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number one defined and employ the components of
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a writing mini lesson number to showcase your
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curiosity and focus on the topic of interest.
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So this relates to your PLC article.
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So my online students,
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you are looking for an article that you
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are then going to share through the group discussion
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on campus students.
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You are sharing this with your PLC. So
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double check on your progress there
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do be sure to follow the assignment guide.
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You do not want to just bring an article, you have a task to do along with that article
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and then we're continuing to practice our cursive.
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Um If you were on campus we did the letter G. The letter H. The letter I.
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And your name yesterday. So when they
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ah
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um some tactile names by using glitter pins, the glitter glue.
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And so the students could also run their fingers along
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this kind of feel the shape of their names.
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So that was the purpose of that little activity.
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Um We are reading aloud each week.
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I know if you are teaching right now that you're reading aloud every day to your kids.
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Hopefully multiple times a day there's such value in that shared time
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together and I will come back to do our writing workshop.
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But I do want to point out that the writing workshop has all of these components.
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A connection, a teaching point, the lesson itself,
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the active engagement and the link.
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And so I'm going to share with you in the resources for this week
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the structured lesson plan that you will complete
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when you're doing your work here at U.
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A. B. For writing workshops just for this class
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and it's specifically designed around these components.
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So let's just talk about this for a second when I'm teaching a mini lesson.
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I want to start with a connection.
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I don't want the mini lesson to feel like it doesn't
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fit like just out of the blue it's not a prompt,
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it should fit inside of this study, a unit of study.
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And so I want to reference, what do we do yesterday, what will we do tomorrow?
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How does today's lesson fit?
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And then I want to make a a target, what's my teaching point? What's my goal today?
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So I'm gonna place whatever that um the context
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of this lesson is into something really focused and really
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clear is probably going to be based on the objective
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for the lesson which is based on the standard,
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the state standard.
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And then there's a part where I teach and this is probably where I'm going to read
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the story to the students if I'm using some kind of text to go with it.
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When I asked the students to find information in that text,
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this is the part where I'm doing the work of guiding.
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Then I'm going to ask the students in some way
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to share with one another and get ready to go,
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right?
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So there's,
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there needs to be this part right here
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where the students are thinking the active engagement portion
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and then the final step before they go to right is the link and it's
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kind of a place where I just reiterate what the point was of this lesson.
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So I'm gonna make him,
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I've taught them this skill and I said now go try it and you're writing.
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So that's those are the steps of the mini lesson in general.
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There is one more step that you're gonna find on your on the lesson plan from you baby.
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And that step is trying it out in your own writing.
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So in addition to all these pieces,
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I also want you to show to the students how you've tried the technique,
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how maybe there's a story you've been writing with the
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kids and you've gone in and you've added to it.
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This particular lesson is going to be about emotion and it's
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a perfect one to showcase where you added some emotion.
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Maybe there was a dialogue that was needed to add the emotion.
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Well look at that a little more closely when we do that lesson together.
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So here I just wanted to stop and think about what
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is writing workshop for what is the many lessons purpose?
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And our text really explains to us several points
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about what it is and writing workshop many lessons,
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we are teaching kids how to write what kind of craft to use,
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we're not teaching them what to write.
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So there will be a unit probably on how writers
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generate ideas but we're not giving them a prompt.
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We're not saying um today it's cold outside. What would you do if you made a snowman?
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You know,
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we're not telling them that we're instead of telling them this
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is how assimilating can help your writing to be more descriptive.
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So that's the kind of work we're going to be doing.
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So be careful to notice the nuance writing workshop also is required every day.
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We needed lots of days. Or
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like I said before, two days a week, three days a week,
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whatever you can accomplish at your school,
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if it's not a part of the structure where you can do it five days a week.
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But
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over time students are going to learn a variety of techniques.
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So we don't want to just have one lesson and then say, okay, every day, you just,
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right, it's quiet time, you're right.
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It's not that it's an active lesson.
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The kids are writing your con your meeting with them,
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conferencing with them helping them.
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So, writing workshops are very active kind of um part of the day
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and we really want to help Children to envision.
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So that's a text term that are authors used this idea
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of envisioning what what it's like to be a writer,
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envisioning their work as writers.
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So pretty much the steps that I just mentioned
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before are in all of our writing lessons.
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The connection, the teaching point, the teaching section, the demonstrations.
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Sometimes this is the text study.
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The kids are going to somehow be actively engaged.
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You want their minds to be thinking about whatever it is the topic is.
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And then again,
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we're adding here this part where you share your writing and then a link,
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we want to focus them before we send them to write.
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All of this happens before we send them away to.
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Right, so be clear about that,
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this many lessons occurs then you send the Children to their spaces too.
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Right,
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So what do we do when we're using books in our many lessons?
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We have three choices are authors layout,
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we just show the students something
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Okay, um
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oh I thought I had an example right here,
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we're just gonna show our students something inside of that text.
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So I'm going to show you two different lessons
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that um if you were on campus yesterday,
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you would have taught one of these two lessons and
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you would have been taught one of these two lessons.
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But in both of these texts, the the um
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teacher candidate who planned the lesson was just
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showing students something inside of that text.
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But I'm gonna pause for just a second, I'm gonna show it to you. Let me pause.
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Okay, pardon that interruption,
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I wanted to show you just an example of
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what it looks like to just show students something.
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So
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oh,
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we're gonna be looking in just a second
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at some lesson plans that your peers prepared.
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So these are from last semester, two different candidates wrote um,
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units and I just borrowed one of their lessons.
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They gave me permission.
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This one is from the story,
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Dragons love tacos and the teacher candidate was
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just showing how the author decided that they
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would make some of the words really large and kind of funny in their font.
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It says do not let those Dragons eat those tacos.
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So she points out to them, Hey, why is the author doing that?
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Why would the author stop in the middle of the page and put this in all caps?
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What's important about this?
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So that's one example of just showing students something.
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The other lesson is also just showing
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students something is shortcut by donald crews.
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And in this one, the author, excuse me, the teacher is focused on using the ellipsis.
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We looked, look, that's an ellipsis. We listened, there's an ellipsis.
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So she shows the students this punctuation and says, why would the author do that?
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Why did they put an ellipsis there in sort of a period. We looked,
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we listened.
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Oh, they're wanting us to stop.
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I can't do, we looked dot, dot, dot without going,
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I can't do. We listened without
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when those dots are there. So the ellipsis slows us down.
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It makes us notice,
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it makes us worry about what's gonna happen when these Children
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are standing on this train track and they're looking and listening
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and I'll tell you I chose this lesson because I actually watched her teach it and
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I was afraid for those Children because she stopped me and made me look at those.
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So
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we look at how authors use techniques to make their
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readers experience what they're intending for them to experience.
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So that's one way that we use text study when we're,
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when we're doing the many lessons, another is just to walk through the text.
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So in a text like the napping house
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I would read this book to the Children.
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Well probably a lot. And then I would use it for many lessons.
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So it's really great if you're reading aloud to your
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kids and maybe there's nothing other than it's just fun.
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But then you can use that book in the
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future for a study because they'll already understand it,
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they'll know it.
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So this is the napping house by Audrey Would illustrated by Don Wood
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and it says
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there is a house, a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And in that house there is a bed a cozy bed
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in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And on that bed there is a granny a snoring granny on
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a cozy bed in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And on that granny there is a child,
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a dreaming child on a snoring granny on a cozy
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bed in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And on that child there is a dog,
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a dozing dog on a dreaming child on a snoring granny on a cozy bed
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in a napping house where everyone is sleeping
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I think by now you have the pattern. So you should read aloud with me.
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These next couple of pages.
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And on that dog there is a cat,
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a snoozing cat on a dozing dog on a dreaming child.
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On a snoring granny on a cozy bed in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And on that cat there is a mouse,
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a slumbering mouse on a snoozing cat on a dozing dog on a dreaming child.
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On a snoring granny on a cozy bed in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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And I miss both. That's on a cozy bed. Sorry.
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And on that mouse there is a flea.
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A wakeful flea.
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Can it be on a slumbering mouse? On a snoozing cat on a dozing dog On a dreaming child.
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On a snoring granny on a cozy bed in a napping house where everyone is sleeping.
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A wakeful flea who bites the mouse
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who scares the cat
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who claws the dog
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who thumps the child
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who bumps the granny
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who breaks the bed
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in the napping house where no one now is sleeping.
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So this is an example of a text walkthrough.
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I've read the book to the Children probably lots of times.
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And we could look at what does the author do to make this story?
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Something that I want to read again and again and again.
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How does the author keep us so engaged And what does the author do as a technique here?
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This is called a cumulative tail.
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So this is a cumulative table. What are they doing?
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Well they start with this line that's going to be in every page,
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a napping house where everyone is sleeping
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and then they add to it
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a napping house where everyone is sleeping
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and then they add to it that they repeat what was the page before.
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So we would take our time and really look through this whole text to get an
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idea of how to make a cumulative text
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now,
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please be careful
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because when we're having writing workshop we want Children to be working on pieces
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and we might show them some a technique but we don't want them
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just to abandon what they're doing and start over all the time.
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I mean today they might want to start over, that's okay,
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but we can let them have some choice when
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it's time to go to writing workshop if you want
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to work on a cumulative text or if we're doing
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a study and we're gonna have everybody do accumulative text
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then maybe we require that
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the students work on the cumulative text half of their writing workshop time,
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so just be um start to really pay attention to that as you're reading in this text,
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just how to navigate that there's choice
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and there's flexibility in the writing workshop.
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The third example our authors give is to have
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a small group inquiry and this is really exciting when
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we can get to the stage of having Children work together to study a text to look for the
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Features that are in that text to look for craft
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ideas and um I just kind of feel like this is
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writing workshop 2.0 um and that for the moment that we're
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at right now as we're just getting acclimated to it,
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that these first two techniques are probably the ones to to go with for now.
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Um I want you to be really familiar with several terms that are in the text,
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so I want you to I'll give you this assignment to find these words in Chapter five.
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Identity envisioning strategies, understandings and conventions.
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You're gonna put each of those words in here,
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so you're gonna actually have five of these maps but I want you to work with
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a little bit of vocabulary and a strategy
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for teaching vocabulary by putting the word here.
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So you'll put to say the word strategies here
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and then you're going to read in the text where they
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define strategies and then put that definition in your own words,
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give me some synonyms for strategies, what else would you call it? Techniques?
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Um Your go to your methods,
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draw a picture of a strategy,
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what what technique would um would come to mind that you could
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draw and then use the word strategies meaningfully in a sentence.
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So it needs to be related to writing workshop.
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So you'll do that with all five of those terms and they're all in chapter five.
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So I want you to use that version of that word, you know?
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Understandings is a pretty broad word, so be sure you're using the one from the text.
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Chapter five also
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