This Week: Sentence Level Revision, Scholarly Articles, and Trade Articles

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  1. All right.
  2. Good people.
  3. Welcome Welcome welcome to this week in english.
  4. Oh 90 89 99.
  5. Now this week we are going to start working on
  6. sentence level revision.
  7. And you know before when we worked on revision we
  8. worked on revising the entire essay.
  9. Now we're gonna drill down and work on what it
  10. means to revise and individual sentences.
  11. And when I say revised individual sentences, what I really
  12. mean is we're going to practice structuring sentences that have
  13. different kinds of sentence structure so that when we read
  14. an essay that we write, everything doesn't sound the same,
  15. everything doesn't quite have the same rhythm.
  16. We want to experiment with having sentences that sound a
  17. little bit different to make sure that the reader stays
  18. engaged and doesn't get bored with reading right?
  19. And the way that we do that is by having
  20. some sentences that are long, something that are short, some
  21. that begin in some ways, some sentences that begin in
  22. other ways.
  23. So we're going to practice all that this week and
  24. it's really going to take you right into another level.
  25. This is one of the lessons that I love teaching.
  26. So I'm really excited to jump into it.
  27. Well, that's 98.
  28. Well, when it comes to 99 what are we going
  29. to do?
  30. Well, we're going to continue our discussion about different types
  31. of articles.
  32. Okay. And what I realized is that not everybody had
  33. access to the week nine lessons.
  34. And so we're going to continue with the week nine
  35. lessons, you know, for week nine.
  36. What we did was we started talking about scholarly articles
  37. and so we're going to continue on with that discussion
  38. around scholarly articles From week nine and that's what I
  39. want us to do today tomorrow and even on Wednesday.
  40. But on Wednesday for the Wednesday lecture, we're going to
  41. continue our discussion about different types of articles.
  42. And we're going to talk about not scholarly articles but
  43. trade articles during our Wednesday lecture.
  44. And once we have a handle of scholarly articles and
  45. trade articles that will really help us launch ourselves into
  46. your third essay.
  47. Yes. S a number three man time is flying.
  48. So after the Wednesday lecture, you're actually going to receive
  49. S a number three.
  50. All right.
  51. We'll have a couple of weeks to work on that
  52. um before that to do.
  53. But you're going to receive it during the Wednesday lecture
  54. and during the Wednesday lecture, I'll talk to you about
  55. how you should structure that particular essay.
  56. Given that last week's conversation was around comparison and contrast.
  57. Ah I think that might be where we go.
  58. All right, so excited to get started this week.
  59. I can't wait to talk to you.
  60. I have a plan for conferences for this week.
  61. Um, So listen more for that as I try to
  62. organise what the conference structure is going to look like
  63. for this week, and I will talk to you all
  64. soon. Take care.