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Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
00:17
Chapter 3
00:18
Chapter 4
01:52
Chapter 5
01:57
Chapter 6
02:01
Chapter 7
02:41
Chapter 8
04:21
Chapter 9
06:12
Chapter 10
08:12
Chapter 11
08:22
Chapter 12
08:23
Chapter 13
08:49
Chapter 14
08:50
Chapter 15
08:50
Chapter 16
09:12
Chapter 17
09:13
Chapter 18
09:14
Chapter 19
09:28
Chapter 20
10:10
Chapter 21
11:31
Chapter 22
11:32
Chapter 23
12:35
Chapter 24
12:36
Chapter 25
12:37
Chapter 26
12:38
Chapter 27
12:39
Chapter 28
12:41
Chapter 29
13:24
Chapter 30
13:24
Chapter 31
14:22
Chapter 32
14:41
Chapter 33
14:56
Chapter 34
Audio Transcript
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commerce are placed after the closing bracket when it comes at the end of a clause.
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So this means you only have a comma after
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brackets when they would naturally be one anyway.
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So again, I think about
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moving on to brackets and commerce.
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So commerce are placed after the closing bracket when it comes at the end of a clause.
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So this means you only have a common after
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brackets when they would naturally be one anyway.
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So think back to what we just said that we can take the bracketed phrase out,
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and the sentence should still make sense
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without in there.
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So take a look at these examples.
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We're going to the theater tomorrow, comma, which will be very pleasant.
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This is correct.
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We put the camera in their naturally
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and normally according to our punctuation rules,
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and we can compare it to this.
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We're going to the theater tomorrow, brackets Friday comma,
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which will be very pleasant.
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So because we naturally have that common there
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after the phrase and then tomorrow we can put it outside the brackets with Friday,
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but we can take a look at this.
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We're going to the theater tomorrow Friday, which will be very pleasant.
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We're missing the comma here because we needed to separate our subordinate clause,
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which will be very pleasant from our main clause.
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We're going to the theater tomorrow,
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so always check your sentence and what it looks like without the bracketed phrase
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in there. And you can task whether or not you have used the right punctuation rules.
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So you should always double check your sentences and imagine
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what they look like without the bracket phrase included.
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So you can test whether or not the correct punctuation rules have been used.
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Let's take a look again at some more examples, many
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so we can take a look at a couple of examples to help us understand this.
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Many of the impression lists were based in Paris. This is fine.
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We don't need a comma here. This is correct.
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Many of the Impressionist, notably money, and
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we're based in Paris again.
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We don't need any comment here because we wouldn't normally
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use it in our sentence without the bracket phrase.
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Compared to this incorrect sentence, many of the Impressionist, notably
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comma based in Paris so we can see without that
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phrase taken out many of the Impressionist comma based in Paris doesn't make sense.
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This is one main clause, so this common here is incorrect.
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We can also take a look at question marks and exclamation points in brackets,
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so they're used inside brackets as needed.
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But the punctuation after the closing brackets follows the usual rules.
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So, for example, the kind woman what was her name? Let her address.
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And we put that question mark inside the bracket because that's a direct question.
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Inside the bracket, we're asking what was her name again?
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This would therefore be correct. We can take that directed phrase out.
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The kind woman left Her address
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still makes sense,
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but this sentence here would be incorrect. Kind woman. What was her name?
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Question Mark Comma left her address because we don't need that comment there.
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So this would be wrong.
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And the final sentence will go into the theater tomorrow at last exclamation point,
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which will be very pleasant so we can see that
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this is correct because we have the correct punctuation,
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as
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so you can see that this is correct. Because if we take that
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phrase out, our sentence is still punctuated correctly.
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So commerce are placed after the closing bracket.
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When it comes at the end of clause,
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you only have a comma after brackets when they would naturally be one.
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Anyway,
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always take that
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phrase out and double check. The punctuation is correct for your sentence
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so we can take a look at a couple of examples to help us become more familiar with this.
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She forgot to invite me, and I'm furious.
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Exclamation point inside the brackets,
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Full stop outside the brackets so we can see that this would actually be correct.
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Because we take that bracket phrase out,
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we still need that full stop to end our main clause.
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She forgot to invite me and the extra information,
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and I'm furious is being exclaimed because it's a lot of intense emotion.
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So the exclamation point actually works here, so this would be correct,
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and we can compare it to the sentence.
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She forgot to invite me, and I'm furious, but we don't have the full stop
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and our main close.
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So this would be wrong,
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because if we take the bracket phrase out that
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were left with a sentence without some closing punctuation,
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and we can take a look at this example,
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I ate the whole cake. Full stop now! I'm stuffed!
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Exclamation Mark, we don't need a full stop on the outside.
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I think back to our rules that we just had a look at.
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We have the punctuation inside here and we don't
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need anything else outside because we take this away.
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We have our correct sentence remaining.
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So full stops are always place outside the closing brackets.
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So full stops are always place outside the closing
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brackets unless the whole sentence is within the brackets.
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So these are the important rules that we need to know in
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order to remember how to use brackets and other punctuation correctly.
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Let's take a look at a punctuation activity and see if
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we can put all of that into practice in order to
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make
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Let's have a look at
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it.
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Let's take a look at a punctuation activity and we'll see if we can put all of the
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things that we just have a look at into
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practice in order to answer some exams style questions.
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So here we are, being asked to spot the mistake in a sentence,
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and they may not always be a mistake.
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So you need to use your knowledge of rackets and punctuation
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in order to spot whether or not they've been used correctly
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and go through each of the rules that, you know,
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remember,
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think about what the sentence would look like without the bracketed phrase.
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That's the best way that you can check whether or not they have been used correctly.
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So take a look at the three sentences on the screen right now,
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and you can take two or three minutes
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to write down the correctly punctuated sentence.
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And if there is no mistake, then you can simply leave it as it is.
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So
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so you can take two or three minutes now to read through
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the sentences and know whether or not there is a mistake.
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If you find one,
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write down what the mistake is and see if you can correctly punctuate the sentence.
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If there is no mistake, you can leave it as it is,
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so take
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so you can put the video now to have a go.
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Okay, if you've all had a go at that, let's take a look at the answers,
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and it's a great idea to have a go at these activities to check your
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own knowledge and make sure that you feel
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confident with everything that you just learned.
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If you find that you are not quite sure about something when you attempt to question,
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then that means you can go back,
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refresh your knowledge and make sure you are
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secure and in order to answer these questions.
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So let's take a look. Question one.
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Turner born 17 seventy-five comma, is one of the most famous English painters.
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This is wrong, and our common here is the incorrect part we should have written.
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Turner Born 17 Seventy-five,
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is one of the most famous English painters
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because we can take out the extra information.
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Born 17 Seventy-five,
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Turner is one of the most famous English painters. One main clause no common needed.
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Our second sentence are knocked over the other bars when I
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was trying to clean up the first one full stop.
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What a mess, Exclamation mark, Full stop.
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This is wrong because we don't need that full stop on the outside of
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the closing brackets because what a mess is its own sentence on its own.
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And if we remove it, then our original sentence makes sense.
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Question three.
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The police arrived just when the Robert was leaving
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the building and not a moment too soon.
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Full stop closing brackets.
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So this is wrong because we need some punctuation on the outside of the brackets,
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and not a moment too soon is part of the original sentence.
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Extra information. So the full stop goes on the outside,
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so fantastic work. If you've got all of these right,
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let's take a look at three more examples,
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and we'll go through the same process again.
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Spot the mistake in the sentence and write down what the mistake
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is and see if you can rewrite the sentence and correct it.
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So it is
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actually correct.
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So it has the correct punctuation, and they may not always be a mistake.
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So if there is no mistake, you can simply right no mistake.
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And again I think about what the sentence
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would look like without the bracketed phrase.
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You can take two or three minutes to read through
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the sentences on the screen and write down your answers,
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and you can pull the video now.
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Okay, Hopefully, we've all had a good go.
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Let's take and fix and take a look at the answers.
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So the first two here for and six the H m s Tama rain in a vegan ship broken up in 18.
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Thirty-eight is a subject of one of Turner's finest works is correct.
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There are no mistakes.
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We have that comment on the outside of our brackets here because in a vegan ship is our
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extra information
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inside?
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Yeah.
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Yeah.
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So if we take out the bracket information the sentence would read the H m s
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and a vegan ship is the subject of one of
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his finest works so common in a vegan ship comma is actually
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correct Because that's one of our subordinate phrases inside our main claws.
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And the bracket of phrase goes inside that phrase. Oh, my God,
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that's so confused.
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Uh,
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yeah.
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So if we take a look at the sentence without the bracketed phrase the h m s t
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r a
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tomorrow tomorrow?
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Yeah,
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Just stop. Just do the whole thing again. All right?
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So the question for hmm camera in a vegan ship broken in.
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Okay,
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this time.
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So the question for the H.
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M s camera in a vegan ship broken up in 18
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thirty-eight is the subject of one of Turner's finest works.
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So we take out the
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phrase the H.
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M s camera in a vegan ship comma is the subject of one of Turner's finest works.
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We can see that that is punctuated correctly because in
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a vegan ship should go in these enclosed commerce here.
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So this would be correct. There's no mistake.
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And six here,
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the dancers who had been practicing for months breathe
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a sigh of relief as the curtain felt.
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We can take that
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phrase out.
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The dancers breathe a sigh of relief as the curtain felt, and it still makes sense.
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This has no mistakes.
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Question five. My mother promised the headmistress that I wouldn't do it again.
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We'll stop. I did do it again. Close brackets is, of course wrong. Because we need
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yeah,
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is, of course wrong because we need a full stop here to end the
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yeah
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is, of course wrong because we need
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yeah,
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question five. My mother promised the headmistress that I wouldn't do it again.
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Full stop. I did do it again.
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Close bracket is of course wrong because we need a
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full stop here to end the sentence in the brackets.
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So that brings us to the end of the punctuation activity. Fantastic work.
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If you've got all of these, Correct.
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If you did make a mistake, though, do make a note of the correct answer.
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Double-check the rules for getting to the right answer.
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Let's take a look now at some rules for one more type of
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punctuation that we might have encountered and may encounter in our 11 plus,
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which is hyphens.
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So these are used to join words together to indicate that
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two or more elements of the sentence are linked there,
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most often used to form compound words.
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So some examples. Princess Charming was sweet, polite and well dressed.
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Well-dressed becomes a compound word with the hyphen.
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The friendly looking cap walk towards me. We have a three year old child.
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We were visiting my mother-in-law.
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That half big idea was sure to fail so we can
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see that we're joining some words up to make compound words.
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But they're also used to show a range of something as well.
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So Queen Victoria range from 18 19 to 19 oh one,
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and the hyphen there can be replaced with the word to
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choose from the numbers 5 to 10,
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so it's showing the range of the numbers.
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Dashes and brackets are used to add extra information to a sentence.
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So we've taken a look at some of the rules for brackets.
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We can take a look at how we use dashes as well. It is, in my opinion, the truth.
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Dashes sometimes indicate and interrupt.
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