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10th Grade Lang/Lit 9/14-9/15
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Paul Warmbier
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watching this sophomores.
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Uh this video is for those of you who have
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to be gone um whether the quarantine sports, what have
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you and Agnes are lectures, I'm recording this before school.
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I'll do some after school as well.
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That way I can remove my mask and uh I
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can project a little bit easier and less less muscle.
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I wanted to go over what we did yesterday on
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for 14 1914 and what we're going to go over
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today, 1915 on another one Um for the previous day.
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If you're one please go over this google slides.
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Remember this is on the classroom, down at the bottom
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and of course work classwork.
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This uh this slide, you should check every single day.
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Uh The writing prompt is on the next slide.
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Please make sure you go to the next slide, You
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visit that and you write on that front for at
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least five minutes.
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Okay. We want to work into that habit of writing
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as much as possible in a short amount of time.
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Please double click the poetry for this week.
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Uh You don't need to take a break unless you
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really need to.
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I want to talk about what an essay is.
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We all know what an essay is.
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We've written, we've written these lengthy five paragraph essays that
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kind of sap our soul what I really want to
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incorporate. Yes.
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Moving into the more creative aspects of the essay and
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how to use that in a positive manner.
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That makes us happier to write essays or at least
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less painful.
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Um and we're going to do that in a number
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of ways.
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Videos, audio recordings, other things that we are going to
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either do or participate in The 1st 1.
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I want you to click on this essay.
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Visual, Okay.
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It is about synesthesia, which is a medical term for
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the crossing of senses.
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This is a video of somebody who sees sounds as
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flashes of color and how she lives her life because
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it's really important.
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I mean, we often consider different perspectives, different uh different
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community, skin colors, identities and orientations when we think about
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our communities, but we often don't think about those of
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us who experience the world in a totally different fashion.
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That's so foreign to us.
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Watch this video, it's about seven minutes past this, watch
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that one and then come back to this.
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Okay, so you've watched that video, It's pretty incredible.
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All right.
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The light show, I can't imagine if that's what she's
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seeing all the time.
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That's I'd be pretty overwhelming.
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Especially as a kid.
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I think what we want to do is we're gonna
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break this down into several bits.
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Okay, I want us to come up with our own
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title for this.
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It's got a title, but part of creativity is coming
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up with our own explanations of things.
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So uh come up with the title.
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My classes yesterday came up with the S word, which
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I really like synesthesia, but it's also uh multiple means
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there. Uh Hearing color is a great title.
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Seeing sound.
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Perhaps I love that.
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That's got great alliteration, how I see the world.
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That's brilliant.
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I love that.
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Those are great titles that help explain a little bit
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more about the I say without getting into the s
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what we do.
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Then if you can see this over here, we look
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at the purpose.
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What is the purpose?
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You can think of the purpose as a visa statement
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or a hypothesis or a topic And those are just
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synonyms for purpose here.
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The purpose of this my class came up with is
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to explain her unique situation for others or to show
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everyone how she sees music or sound one sentence.
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Very simple.
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Okay, don't overthink these things.
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Once we have the purpose, what we want to do
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that is really get into what is some evidence that
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proves that purpose that shows that purpose.
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One she gave a demonstration of her situation.
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They're breaking again to the things that she did or
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talked about.
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Two, she explained the science or gave data in fact
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And three.
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She gave a story about her life.
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Okay. She demonstrated, she explained and she gave a story,
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those three things together combined bring the purpose to life
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and fill out this essence.
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Yeah. Now you've done that the next example that I
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want you to do that has an assignment attached to
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it. I've attached the assignment output and haven't yet put
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into the classroom.
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But I will be here shortly listen to this.
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This is our very first this, I believe.
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That's it.
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Okay. This is an essay entitled remembering all the boys
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by of the baptista out of California.
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It's very short, maybe 300 words long.
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She needs it out loud, which is one reason I
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love this.
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I believe we can hear it as well as read
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along. Listen to it as many times as you need.
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Okay. And then click here and use this organizer to
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break the essay down into little bits.
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Your guys who's going to look like this.
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I don't know if you can see it actually.
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It's the name of your essay now.
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The name that the author wrote was remembering all the
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boys, but I encourage you to come up with a
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creative name that tries to capture some scene.
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one of the themes of the Spanish And give us
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salary three sentences or less.
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There is beauty in brevity.
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What was the overall idea or purpose and then three
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supporting details that explain the purpose.
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Okay, this is direct evidence.
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It's best when we use quotes for this.
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Okay. Uh, reach out to me if you have any
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questions or if you are confused by something email or
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I'm happy to set up a google meets meeting before
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school or after school and keep looking for more of
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these videos and more work.
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Uh, coming up on the classroom.
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Okay, I hope you are well and or if you're
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not that you are getting well soon, and I hope
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to see you back in class as soon as possible,
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take care.
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