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Levels of Experience, Memory Structure, and Memoir Checklist
Transcript of Levels of Experience, Memory Structure, and Memoir Checklist
Level 1 experiences are:
the same to everybody
you would tell to anybody
a lot more interesting to you
BORING and predictable
Level 2 experiences are:
happen differently for everyone
you would tell only your friends
INTERESTING for OTHER people to hear
more INTERESTING and not predictable
Level 3 experiences are:
you might write about in a journal
you would only tell your best friend
EXTREMELY interesting to read
Level 4 experiences are:
what happens in your life that you probably never talk about
you will possibly never write about in your life
Draw this in your notes
(Draw the squares too):
the death of a pet,
someone trying to fight with you,
or a problem with a teacher
Examples: the death of a family member,
(Things I know)
Most really engaging pieces of writing have something from each hand.
Quicklist: List some times when you had fun participating with other people.
(Think levels 2-3)
1. Where were you?
2. What happened first?
3. What happened next?
4. What happened last?
5. What did you learn or realize? How did this event change you?
Answer each question with ONE complete sentence.
Now, take your kernel essay and turn it into a full memoir.
Explode at least one moment
Follow the Rule of Pebbles
* Write about one pebble, not multiple pebbles.
Answer the So What? question
* Good writing has a purpose. What is the significance of your memoir? What is the point of it?
Qualities of a Memoir that Works
* The title is interesting and fits the story
* The lead brings the readers right into the action of the story
* It follows the rule of pebbles--it's about a pebble, not pebbles
* Background information that the reader needs is woven into the story
* There’s lots of I: thoughts, feelings, and observations of the writer
* The pace is slowed down to a point that makes it easy to follow
* A reader can hear, see and feel the experience because the writer supplies sensory details
* The small details show what matters to the people in the memoir
* There is dialogue; the writer uses it to show what people are like and how they are feeling
* The ending serves a purpose and is satisfying
* There’s a So What?: a meaning or significance that was discovered by the writer during the act of writing the memoir
* There’s a setting: a time and place
* The action flashes back and forward in time and creates questions in the reader’s mind about what will happen next
* The writer invented details that fit with the spirit, intention, and truth of the story
Clean Up Stale Writing By Removing:
Today you need:
Get ready for a star point.
Get out your kernel essay from last week.
Turn your kernel essay into a full essay. Here are your choices for "popping" your essay:
Kernel Essay Sentence #1
Kernel Essay Sentence #2
Kernel Essay Sentence #3
Kernel Essay Sentence #4
Write the sentences CORRECTLY.
1. After we finish me and my mom are going shopping.
2. he run all the time.
3. While I was washing my clothes my mom wash dishes.
4. your my favorite person in the world!
5. This isnt mine. its yours.
Where were you?
When was this?
Who were you with?
What was the situation?
What were you doing?
What happened first?
What led up to this event?
What did you hear?
What did you see?
What did you or other people say?
What did you or other people do?
What did you think/feel?
What happened next?
What happened last?