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Ms Wu Essay Correction
Transcript of Ms Wu Essay Correction
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Mask the income difference between families. All children dress the same, whether rich or poor.
the school's logo
implement a policy
a sense of beloning / order
a badge of pride
sharpen one's focus on school work
avoid peer pressure
foster a better leaning environment
foster school spirit
mask the income differnce
get sidetracked by the latest fashion trends
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Increase students' self-esteem because they do not have to participate in the "school fashion show." Dressing alike helps students learn that what really counts is on the inside.
Decrease the influence of gangs and gang violence. Uniforms make it more difficult to sneak in weapons, and easier to ban gang colors or symbols.
Improve learning by reducing distraction, sharpening focus on schoolwork and making the classroom a more serious environment.
Save families time and money. Many parents report that three uniforms cost about the same as one pair of designer jeans. Even some students admit that wearing the same colors everyday makes it easier to shop for new clothes.
Develop only two main points
Use detailed and accurate words and phrases
Use more linking devices and signposting phrases
by Z. Lian