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Mr Men Observation

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Ben Massey

on 20 July 2017

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Transcript of Mr Men Observation

This is a perfect sentence!
mr grumpy was angrie becorse Little miss sunshin kept similing
Are you ready to learn?
What's the point of that?!
We are learning to:
Assess and edit our work.
Have a chat!
We are learning to
assess and edit our work.
Have a chat!
check celebrate edit polish
green orange blue
What have we been learning?
We are learning to
assess and edit our work.
Let's make this writing a little more perfect.
Mr busy told his plan to mr Bump and Little miss Chatterbox. Wen they heard the plan, big smiles crept across their faces early the next morning, Mr Tired was woken by a loud whistling sound. What a horrible way to wake up? He jumpt out of bed to find mr busy standing there with a whistle in his mouth. He blew it again. “Come on mr Tired! Up and about! Its picnic time!” he sed.
Remember...
Oh no! I've forgotten what to look for!
Accurate punctuation (. , A ' "")
Adjectives and noun phrases (huge, tiny...)
Have a chat!
Spelling (past tense -ed, contractions...)
Conjunctions (and, who, when, if, because...)
Adverbs (quietly, suddenly, sadly, next...)
Green,

orange
and
polish
.
We are learning to
assess and edit our work.
Challenge:
Can you add
green
and
orange
comments?
Finally:
Check targets and tick if achieved.
Third:
highlight any
oranges
.
Next:
find the
greens
and highlight them.
First:
Read the paragraph
together
.
Remember...
Oh no! I've forgotten what to remember!
After that:
Polish and update in
blue
.
This is a perfect sentence!
little Miss sunshine was sad wen Mr Grumpy stealed her pancake?
Are you ready to learn?
What's the point of that?!
We are learning to:
Use spelling prompts.
Have a chat!
We are learning to
use spelling prompts.
Have a chat!
spell prompt support check
edit polish
What have we been learning?
We are learning to
use spelling prompts.
Modelled writing.
Remember...
Oh no! I've forgotten what to use when I write!
Accurate punctuation (. , A ' "")
Adjectives and noun phrases (sad, happy...)
Have a chat!
Spelling (past tense -ed, contractions...)
Conjunctions (and, who, when, if, because...)
Adverbs (quietly, suddenly, sadly, next...)
Plenary
Did you remember to use your spelling prompts?
Then:

Green
and
orange
the sticker.
We are learning to
assess and edit our work.
What if there are no mistakes?
Then you can just do nothing!
Is Mr Grumpy right?
Have a chat!
Look at
ONE
book
TOGETHER
!
Let's hear some edited paragraphs!
What did you work on with your CP?
Was it helpful? Why?
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