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Model Answer - Peer Assessment - How to be more like me!

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Andrew Wilson

on 18 April 2016

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Transcript of Model Answer - Peer Assessment - How to be more like me!

My first thoughts...
To what extent is socialism defined by its rejection of capitalism?
How to be more like me - Model Answer - Peer Assessment!
Developing my answer...
Marking My Answer...
Practice for peer assessment...
Highlight for AO evidence
Scoring
Comments
So what did you think...
Peer Assessment...
1. Highlight AO evidence - make sure you can justify your score!
2. Comments - how to improve to the next mark band for
each
AO!
3. Let me see!!!
What to take from today...
How I wrote the model answer - thought processes, planning, writing style
Mark my answer - it isn't perfect!!!
Peer assessment - the search for evidence, the assessment objectives and how to get better
How could you have approached the question better - be more like me!
Step 1 - internal discussion and debate about the
answer(!!!)

already -
not
structure or key terms
but
where am I going?
Step 2 - what structure am I going to use to get to my answer?
Variants of socialism
Values in socialism
Actually Writing The Essay...
What are the key terms I need to define?
To what extent is
socialism

defined
by its
rejection
of
capitalism
?
The actual key term that I used to develop my core argument was
define!
Attack the statement - socialism is defined
only
by its rejection of capitalism.
Is there anything I can exploit in the statement?
To what extent is socialism defined by its rejection of
capitalism
?
The statement is based on the
assumption
that
capitalism
and
conservatism
are the same thing!
Why do I think that...
Socialism was not just about economics
The issues related to class and equality are arguments that are supported by
conservatism
not
capitalism
!
The next question was this...

Variants or values? This then gives me the structure for my essay!!!

This is a personal choice - for me - using the core values helped to develop my core argument
How could you have approached the task better?
What do you need to improve?

Planning - knowledge - analysis - confidence???
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