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ESSAY WRITING

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Edita Niauriene

on 14 February 2014

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Transcript of ESSAY WRITING

ESSAY WRITING
Topics:

1. Education and languages
2. Technologies: computers, mobiles, etc.
3. Environment and global problems
4. Food and healthy eating
5. Sports and staying fit
6. Shopping and money
7. Communication: relations with other people
8. Tourism, travel and transport

9. House, home
10. Work and employment
11. Free time, entertainment
12. Society and social matters
13. Health and body care
14. Mass media
15. Town, places, sightseeing

Content
: topic relevance, coherence, argumentation and supporting ideas 5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1 – 0
Layout
, organization and cohesion 5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1 – 0
Range
of grammatical and lexical structures
5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1 – 0
Accuracy
of grammar and vocabulary 5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1 – 0
Spelling
and punctuation 4 – 3 – 2 – 1 – 0

Final – 24
grammar
: e.g. when I asked her how she is, she said that she feels... -> how she was / she said she felt
vocabulary
: e.g. people need to ensure they are taking a right path -> to make sure
spelling
: decission -> decision, continuiuing -> continuing
Correction of mistakes
Grammar, vocabulary, spelling
The amount of knowledges is unsufficient (2 mist.)
The population of different areas of the world are increasing dramaticaly. (2)
The goverment could to increase the amount of cheap social housing. (2)
Education is improving gradually, but situation does not progressing enough fast (2)
Television have had as much consequence on the way we live as the internet has. (2)
He always spend too much time accessing the internet in his lesure time. (2)
More money need to be invested in infrastructure, but it depends of the funds available. (2)
Office acommodations makes the city centre looks soulless (3).
Music has great impact on people lifes, as it affects they mood. (4)
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