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Outline to Essay

We're Almost There!
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Joshua Ostini

on 10 December 2014

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and Body Paragraph Writing
Outlines to Essays
One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes. For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell. This is important because it means the students can buy fewer pieces of clothing and allow their families to save that money for more important purchases. Furthermore, requiring uniforms means that students will not have to worry as much about buying expensive name brands to fit in; everyone will be equal in their uniforms. This is important because most students want to fit in, but they also want to help their families be financially successful. It is clear that uniforms will help families save a great deal of money.
Body Paragraph Completed
One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes. For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell. This is important because it means the students can buy fewer pieces of clothing and allow their families to save that money for more important purchases. Furthermore, requiring uniforms means that students will not have to worry as much about buying expensive name brands to fit in; everyone will be equal in their uniforms. This is important because most students want to fit in, but they also want to help their families be financially successful.

Closing: It is clear that ____________________ (restate topic sentence).
“It is clear that uniforms will help families save a great deal of money.”
One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes. For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell. This is important because it means the students can buy fewer pieces of clothing and allow their families to save that money for more important purchases. Furthermore, requiring uniforms means that students will not have to worry as much about buying expensive name brands to fit in; everyone will be equal in their uniforms.

Commentary #2: This is important because _________________________________________ (explain reasoning; this must be opinion, not fact.)

“This is important because most students want to fit in, but they also want to help their families be financially successful. “
One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes. For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell. This is important because it means the students can buy fewer pieces of clothing and allow their families to save that money for more important purchases.

Evidence #2: Furthermore, ______________ (give example, use a complete sentence).
“Furthermore, requiring uniforms means that students will not have to worry as much about buying expensive name brands to fit in; everyone will be equal in their uniforms. “
One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes. For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell.  

Commentary #1: This is important because _______________________________________ (explain reasoning; this must be opinion, not fact.)

“This is important because it means the students can buy fewer pieces of clothing and allow their families to save that money for more important purchases.”
Topic Sentence #1:One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes.

Ex #1: For example,___________ (give example, use a complete sentence).



“For example, students could wash and wear the same outfit over and over again, and no one would be able to tell.”
Body Paragraph Pattern, Cont.
Topic Sentence #1: One reason that ___________________ (tie to subject of thesis) is because ___________________ (state first reason here).




“One reason why schools should require students to wear uniforms is because it will allow families to spend less money on school clothes”
Body Paragraph Writing
The opposite order of the introduction
Any conclusion is better than no conclusion!
Thesis
(restate):Start by re-stating your thesis statement in a different way. “Schools uniforms are clearly the solution to many of the problems that are plaguing school in today’s society.”
Ideas:
Review the points you’ve already made, “Students should be allowed to go to school in the safety, comfort, and ease that uniforms provide.”
Extend:
Make a broad, sweeping statement or call to actions, “It is society’s duty to see to the education of it’s youth. America must do what it needs to improve education, like requiring uniforms.”
The Conclusion

There should always be at least three body paragraphs that are at least 6-10 sentences long.
The next two should follow the same pattern.
Body Paragraphs
All body paragraphs follow the same pattern:
Topic Sentence (Reason)
Example #1
Commentary on Example #1
Example #2
Commentary of Example #2
(add more example/commentary pairs as needed)
Closing Sentence
Body Paragraph Pattern
Copy it over from your outline; it’s already done.

Hook
Info
Thesis
The Introduction
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