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Copy of Escape for Kraznir: Kraznir and Slinsil Descriptions

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Laura Mathews

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Kraznir and Slinsil:
The description To describe our fantasy land using ambitious adjectives. What a good one looks like: WAGOLL Fantasy so far?.. Full stops and Capital
Letters What is a sentence? Below are 5 pieces of text from advertisements. Identify which ones are sentences using the rules.

1. They are big and they are clever!
2. Dreamy white chocolate
3. Check out our new healthy range.
4. Milk chocolate with gold honeycomb centre
5. Do you dare to whizz, loop and twist on a journey of terror?

Peer Assessment Round 2! Peer Assessment Now try again- it'll be the same mark scheme. But this time, describe the other place either Kraznir or Slinsil. Kraznir by Miss Mathews Card Sort Any more? Adjectives are? Sort your adjectives into 2 columns: one for Slinsil and one for Kraznir.
Write a more simple adjective for each one.
The winning team will receive 2 ticks each. Write another ambitious adjective on the post-it in front of you.
Be prepared to read it out.



dreary Your Task A slither of murky green water dribbled down the mountain crag. Beyond this one source of life loomed the terrifying town of Kraznir: the inhospitable Kraznir; the town of no hope.

Mist pervades the air and all about you is damp and dreary. The mist itself seems suffocating, sucking all the happiness away from the place. The smog was so thick you had to squint to see any sign of habitation at all. Then they emerge: heavy houses, dark caves and finally the castle, guarding over them, a sentinel against happiness.

The walls of Krill castle glitter black as obsidian;
fire like yet threatening. Give one mark for each ambitious adjective.
Give one mark for every Capital Letter used in the right place.
Give 2 marks for an exclamation mark ! or question mark?
Give 3 marks for every comma used.
Give 4 marks for using paragraphs.

What is their total score? If you want a challenge- call me for an extension card. Give one mark for each ambitious adjective.
Give one mark for every Capital Letter used in the right place.
Give 2 marks for an exclamation mark ! or question mark? or full stop.
Give 3 marks for every comma used.
Give 4 marks for using paragraphs.

What is their total score? To understand what makes a full sentence.
To understand when to use full stops and capital letters. The rules:

A written sentence makes sense on its own.
It has a main verb.
It starts with a capital letter.
It ends with a full stop.


The best athletes wear special trainers.
Write a description of Slinsil or Kraznir
You should include:

What can be seen?
What does it smell like?
What are the buildings and surroundings like?
What can you hear?


TICK TASK: try and use at least 4 of the adjectives from your card sort or post-its. Words that describe nouns. Quick Quiz on our Knowledge so far!

1.Which fantasy land is nicer- Slinsil or Kraznir?
2.Who is the King of Kraznir?
3. What does genre mean?
4. What does fantasy mean?
5. What is an adjective?
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