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Private Peaceful

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What can you infer?
1. What is the double meaning of the title?
CharacterS
PRIVATE PEACEFUL
2. What does the main
image show?
3. What do the butterflies represent?
5. What does the caption suggest?
4. What do the colours suggest?
What are they thinking?
Class, 1900s
What do we know?
What can we infer?
I have the bravest brother in the world.
We’ll always be together, the three of us, for ever and ever.
I didn’t want any enemy soldier ever setting foot on our soil, on my place.
I could believe only in the hell I was living in, a hell on earth, and it was man-made, not God-made.
I must survive. I have promises to keep.
WHAT is this book Going to be about?
Tommo's Childhood
How were these images important in the story?
RAF5: Characters

LO: tbat uss how characters
are ed in the

Start at the bottom
Make it 140 letters or less
Make up hashtags (#hategrandmawolf)
mention:
- Father's funeral
- First day at school

RIP James Peaceful. Real role model and wonderful dad. @CharliePeaceful
#swallow #stupidcolonel
(about 10 years ago from the web)
TOMMO'S TWEETS
'Big Joe' guide, interpreter and teacher'
'mad old duffer'
'our sister'
'a loony, off his head, off his rocker'
'a wolf pretending to be Little Red Riding Hood's grandma
Who is described by these words and WHY?
significant images from Private Peaceful
Teenage Years
How were these
important in the story?
Charlie, Tommo and Molly are like
because...
RAF2: Development of Relationships

LO: tbat explain how Morpurgo depicts relationships
First encounter
Molly talking about Big Joe
Molly joins the Peaceful gang
Molly stands up to Wolfwoman
Tommo and Molly drift apart
Emotion GRAPH
Tommo's
Emotions
Events in Tommo's life
Plot a graph of Tommo's feelings
Father's death
Meeting Mr
Munnings
Molly doing Tommo's laces
Fight with Jim Parsons
How has the relationship developed?
What do we find out about the 1910s in Private Peaceful??
Boer Wars
Concentration Camps - 27,000 Boer women and children died
Battle of Marne
Mon Dieu!
250,000 of us died in
this battle
but we defeated the
Germans!
RAF1/WAF7: Authentic Language
LO: tbat
ine
and facts
from the
p
uce
an authentic letter
- Mother married beneath her
- Charlie and Tommo poaching
- Abduction of Bertha
- Charlie: wicked thief; impregnated a girl that he isn't married to
- Molly's family are 'good people'
- Molly is wicked and immoral
GRANDMA'S SPITEFUL LETTER
What arguments did the sergeant general use to convince the boys to join the army?
Propaganda
Private Peaceful A - Z
A - Attraction
B - Bertha
C -
...
X - xenophobia
Y - youth, yearning
Z - zealot
Find a quote for each image
What's the message?
How does the WW1 propaganda compare
to 2015 recruitment adverts?
I'm back,
folks!
What makes up 'I AM A FORESTER'?
RAF5: Language of Propaganda
LO:
How many of these can you find in the speech?
question
language
The sergeant general persuades the audience to join the army by using repetition.
For instance, he repeats the words 'hard slog'.

This phrase suggests that a good soldier needs patience and resilience to survive 'the hard slog'. He seems to be using reverse psychology to convince the soldiers.
Top Three Techniques
Be
war
e!
Can you link these images to Private Peaceful?
Private Peaceful Bingo
Pick twenty nouns
(objects, ideas, character, feelings)
gas
uniform
trench
fear
Find
Ten
Correct Statements
Who would play
Trenches
The Ending
The Assessment
Somme, 1 million casualties
How do these images sum up the ending of Private Peaceful?
RAF1: PREDICTIONS
LO: tbat infer significant themes and ideas from the front cover
PRIVATE PEACEFUL
HOW IS 'PRIVATE PEACEFUL' similar to...
truthful lie
beautiful monster
white night
deafening silence
living dead
What did you find out about 'Oranges and Lemons'?
Tracking Key Characters
What do these posters have in common?
What do you remember about WW1 propaganda?
Can you link each image to the events of 'private peaceful'?
Tommo's Twitter
Joined the army with my brother and BFF @Charlie #bravery #allgrownup
Can you link each image to an event/character in Private Peaceful?
Which song would sum them up?
Tommo - 'What I did for love' by David Guetta ft Emeli Sande

Molly - 'Stay with me' by Sam Smith

Charlie -

Jimmy Parsons -

Mrs Peaceful -

The Colonel -

Grandma Wolf -
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
What problems has
Tommo encountered
so far?
Tommo
HEADLINES
Archduke Assassinated in Sarajevo - a WARning Sign!
(28th June 1914)

500,000 Casualties at Marne
(September 1914)
in a Hollywood version of Private Peaceful?
Tommo
Charlie
Molly
Jimmy Parsons
Wilkie
Sergeant Hanley

WAF2 and 7: One Day in the Trenches
P1: A morning in the trenches: a description of the setting

P2: Flashback: your excitement as you joined and your expectations

P3: Back in the present: a description of the other soldiers and the sergeant in charge

P4: Flashback: training camp

P5 and P6: Back in the present: a shelling/gas attack

Structure
P1: A morning in the trenches: a description of the setting
=
>
Go, Tommy, go!
Can you link each image to an important event in 'Private Peaceful'?
Whaaat? You would replace me with Daniel Radcliffe?
Don't worry, you're prettier than the girls from Divergent and Hunger Games put together!
Who/what is the odd one out? why?
Miss McAllister
Mrs Peaceful
Colonel's Wife
The Colonel
Mr Munnings
Hanley
The train journey
The boat journey
The journey to Wipers
Wilkie
Buckland
Hanley
Can you come up with an example of a war-related:
Metaphor:

Simile:

Repetition:

Personification:

Alliteration:

Onomatopoeia:

Enumeration:
Title of your poem: _________________

________________________________________ blast
________________________________________ shell
________________________________________ past
________________________________________ hell

________________________________________ teeth
________________________________________ blind
________________________________________ beneath
________________________________________ behind

________________________________________ dies
________________________________________ lies
Tommo
Charlie
Molly
Mrs Peaceful
Big Joe
Mr Peaceful
Grandma Wolf
Mr Munnings
Miss McAllister
The Colonel
The Colonel's Wife
Jimmy Parsons
Little Les
Nipper Martin
Pete
Buckland
Horrible Hanley
Wilkie
Anna
Bertha
Hun
Fritz
Tommy
Farmer Cox
WHO WOULD TWEET
Goodbye Belgium, hello Blighty! #prouddad
Time to lick them into shape #toughlove
Je suis amoureuse de toi #tommy
No rain, no mud, no shells from the Fritz #bliss #calmbeforethestorm
@charlie Heard about your injury. Is the watch still ticking?
Tommo
Charlie
Molly
Peaceful
BigJoe
Grandma Wolf
Mr Munnings
McAllister
Colonel
JimmyParsons
LittleLes
Nipper Martin
Pete
Buckland
Hanley
Wilkie
Anna
Bertha
Hun
Fritz
Tommy
Farmer Cox
Can you fill in the blanks?
How many characters can you find?
Title
Creative Description: 'One Day in the Trenches'
Assessment Focuses
WAF2 and 7
Level
Teacher Target
Next time...
1.
2.
Write out corrected spellings in green
3.
Act on your target in green (Add more detail, rewrite a sentence, etc)
Assessment Feedback
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